When you landed it was like an atom bomb, a beautiful cloud that lasted days to months.
Little did I know I'd been torn down to bone, with nothing to hide we were all alone.
Bit by bit stitch by stitch together we've worked through any glitch, for neither of us was ready to face the darkest of pits
Those days and months have quickly turned into years, yet the gift you keep giving is not hidden with fear.
Never to judge any emotional tears, the love that surround us has transform the atmosphere
You may or may not of asked for this life, but no matter what happens I'm honoured.
To be given many chances in new beginnings woven by your light.
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I will clear all these words from my soul, may I never stop writing and become the man my dreams are made of. Thank you again for your precious time, keep up the write.
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So beautiful Dan, truly written from your heart
That it was and helped bring more shine with your time added.
Always appreciated
A lovely poem. Very touching words.
Thank you, really appreciate your time.
The love you get is equal to the love you give. You've lots to give - tis plain to see.
That is true but as you know sometimes I do cloud my own mind.
Always appreciate your time my friend
Wonderful positive words Dan, you have come a long way and it is so rewarding to see.
Andy
All with a little help from my family and friends. Many can be found here but I'll say you top my list, truly grateful for the time you give.
Have a wonderful week my friend
Much peace and respect
What a wonderful poem! Truly expressed to a fine point of eloquence. Bravo! 💖
Thank you my friend, it was thought of before I heard the news in this time...
history may not repeat but it rhymes 😉
Keep up the peace and respect
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