listless autumn leaf
On whims of oceanic breeze
Where destiny leads ?
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Author:
spilleronsheet (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Sad part of haiku and senryu… You never feel enough, Wish could write more …. More and more of them… But to write takes a lot; Perplexed,
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Dear Spiller, your first Haiku ..WOW. But I too feel the same way, haiku limits the expression....
Cute and precise !!
Fill it up....where destiny leads in your next poem ...awaiting 🙂
Thanks a lot dear Vamsi
Yesterday I posted a senyru
Your right, I will add in more lines in coming future….
So awaiting to read more from you
Beautiful words spilleronsheet.
Andy
Thanks dear Andy
a wonderful effort
staying true, to Haiku's Nature roots
thanks for sharing, dear poet
Thanks dear Mek
I know for a fact these are not easy .. not even bad ones are easy .. but you make it look so bloomin easy and my word ... this is so much better than just GOOD ........ Neville 🙂
Thank you so much dear Neville…still a novice to appreciate beauty, but maybe someday will be able to touch a million hearts….that shall be victory
Wow what a fine write! Very rich in meaning and interpretations! Destiny and our odds against the world we're living in! 💖
Thank you so much dear Rocky….let’s create a beautiful destiny…
I like this, you can play around with it.
Where destiny leads
listless autumn leaf
On whims of oceanic breeze.
I'll need to try it.
Thanks dear Paul
Try ahead
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