Into Abyss

FallenAngel1🕊

Within the twilight…

..of dawn

I stand upon

a mountain of dreams

 

A glimmer of light

reveals a fawn

beyond the misty streams

 

Streams of stars

winding through the galaxy into abyss

Carrying fawns and broken hearts

With the dust

Of true loves kiss.

Written by;W.J.G.🕊

 

 

 

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  • Goldfinch60

    Those true love kisses will always be there WJG.

    Andy

  • orchidee

    Good write WJG.

  • dusk arising

    Now that's a really romantic title mate LOL.

    But the poetry is superb. Ethereal continuity of love's hope.

    • FallenAngel1🕊

      Lol,if you look at the time I posted it,2:21am,..I guess I fell asleep as I was thinking of a title😂 Cheers dusk🍻🌞🕊

    • L. B. Mek

      if this a mere draft
      I can't wait to see, it finished
      to your polished, satisfaction levels..
      just so awesome
      to see your poetry getting more refined
      and soaring so majestically..
      thanks for sharing, dear Poet
      a great reading experience

      • FallenAngel1🕊

        Thank you L.B. It is finished. I posted it at 2:21am,I think by accident as I was trying to think of a title. And then I fell asleep,lol😂. But the really funny thing is,I noticed last night I reached 100 poems. I found a draft poem in my notes this morning, "100 poems,this makes one hundred and one...." I guess I'll have to change it to one hundred and two,..or scrap it😜 Cheers🍻🌞🕊

        • L. B. Mek

          Congrats!
          and here's 🍾🥂
          to your next thousand, dear poet

          • FallenAngel1🕊

            Lol,thanks🍻🕊🌞

          • orchidee

            Yes, into the abyss. I thought you was writing about my brain-box, where depths of emptiness and black holes are found! Sheer nothingness. Well, about 3 brain cells though. lol.

            • FallenAngel1🕊

              Curly,Larry and Moe😂😂😂🍻✌️🌞🕊

              • orchidee

                With big hats with 'D' on them - for dunce?!

              • Rocky Lagou

                Lovely poem and truly expresses love so well! A true love's kiss is something I think we all desire! Well done! 💖

                • FallenAngel1🕊

                  Thanks Rocky. I thought of those words "True loves kiss" almost twenty years ago. It's in one of my old poems.🍻🌞🕊

                • kitty the naughty poet

                  A great poem my friend

                • Bella Shepard

                  Gentle, touching, beautiful!

                  • FallenAngel1🕊

                    Thank you very. The more I read it as I reply to comments,the stranger it seems to me🥂🌹🕊🌞



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