The time had come to issue a correction
for assumptions drawn were all misconception
so she told those present
‘I’m truly not pregnant’
A statement conceived without contraception’.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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Oh lol, good write M.
Have supplies of more syllaberles come in now?!
They've been diverted to Ukraine - sorry - shouldn't joke about that awful conflict.
... not a word outa place sir .. perfectly penned, poemed & posted ..
... nice drawing of them two mating frigate birds too ...
... Neville 🙂
There's a bit of a bird theme today. Thanks Neville - ......!
Super limerick Michael.
Andy
Ah, the story of many a poor innocent human thrust into a dysfunctional world without any choice in the matter.
Limerick away, Michael - all manner of truths may surface in a few succinct lines.....😊
Truth will always float to the surface - gives me an idea for something more serious. Might post it tomorrow if it's written by then - cheers DD
what symmetry with your artwork and words, dear Poet
'I might be the only one
but in your art
I can make out, half
of a soaring bird, wings stretched gracefully
and the other half, burdened with
a high peak, grounded mountain obstacle..
resonating, with those moments
of life
where opportunity greets
inside
the doors to our caged existences...'
(lol
reading back my words, I sound so absurdly pretentious
but I'll keep this, maybe
there's something here beyond my comprehension)
such a great write!
Pretentious never - yes I can see the Japanesque mountain - not intended but it's sure there.
One of the bestlimericks i have ever seen M.E. nice one and intomy fav's
I'm really flattered - you're too kind - thanks dusk
Great limerick and drawing. You’re so witty.
Michael,
A super limerick and artwork…both intricate and artfully constructed. You are the master, dear Maestro.☺️
Hope Jeanne is doing well and heard what was hoped by all…including me.🙏🏻❤️
Laura🌻
Thanks Laura - will PM you.
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