Space And Time.

Goldfinch60



 

In our life we have space,

In our life we have time,

They are always with us ,

How can we look at them

And make them better?

We can decorate space with art,

We can decorate time with music

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 2nd, 2022 02:11
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just something I saw and put words to.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 27
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  • dusk arising

    Or maybe just purely through love, we can decorate space with seeing and decorate time with being. Maybe too abstract... I don't know.

    • Goldfinch60

      Yes love would work d a.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      Good write Gold.
      It's poor decoration from me, when I start singing! lol.

      • Goldfinch60

        Some one may like it - Kitty perhaps?

        Andy

        • orchidee

          Yes lol. have I turned from KP to Kitty?! Well, I never see KP hardly, only in the papers or on telly. lol.

        • Fay Slimm.

          love the thought andy and thanks for sharing it

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Fay, much appreciated.

            Andy

          • Michael Edwards

            Sadly time to fill the space grows in short supply the older we get - make the most of everything.

            • Goldfinch60

              Totally agree Michael, we must make the most of every moment of our lives.

              Andy

            • John Prophet

              Works for me. 😃

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you John.

                Andy

              • Rozina

                Wish we would all do this. How wonderful.

                • Goldfinch60

                  So do Rozina, so do I.

                  Andy

                • AuburnScribbler

                  A wonderfully written poetic question and answer here Andy.

                  Though I also agree with dusk arising, actual love, not fake love, can also comprise both the space and time we have.

                  Bravo, and I hope that all is well!

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Ben, yes real love can do this for us all.

                    Andy

                  • FallenAngel1🕊

                    Both time and space in our lives need to be decorated. And sometimes we rearrange the furniture.Good write Andy.🌞✌️🕊

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you Fallen, much appreciated.

                      Andy

                    • Bella Shepard

                      I love the music that you choose to accompany your poem. It is elegant and haunting, it conveys the beautiful message of your piece. So simple yet powerful, your words and music stir the soul. Thank You!

                      • Goldfinch60

                        My absolute pleasure Bella, thank you for your kind words.

                        Andy



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