In our life we have space,
In our life we have time,
They are always with us ,
How can we look at them
And make them better?
We can decorate space with art,
We can decorate time with music
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 2nd, 2022 02:11
- Comment from author about the poem: Just something I saw and put words to.
- Category: Reflection
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Or maybe just purely through love, we can decorate space with seeing and decorate time with being. Maybe too abstract... I don't know.
Yes love would work d a.
Andy
Good write Gold.
It's poor decoration from me, when I start singing! lol.
Some one may like it - Kitty perhaps?
Andy
Yes lol. have I turned from KP to Kitty?! Well, I never see KP hardly, only in the papers or on telly. lol.
love the thought andy and thanks for sharing it
Thank you Fay, much appreciated.
Andy
Sadly time to fill the space grows in short supply the older we get - make the most of everything.
Totally agree Michael, we must make the most of every moment of our lives.
Andy
Works for me. 😃
Thank you John.
Andy
Wish we would all do this. How wonderful.
So do Rozina, so do I.
Andy
A wonderfully written poetic question and answer here Andy.
Though I also agree with dusk arising, actual love, not fake love, can also comprise both the space and time we have.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
Thank you Ben, yes real love can do this for us all.
Andy
Both time and space in our lives need to be decorated. And sometimes we rearrange the furniture.Good write Andy.🌞✌️🕊
Thank you Fallen, much appreciated.
Andy
I love the music that you choose to accompany your poem. It is elegant and haunting, it conveys the beautiful message of your piece. So simple yet powerful, your words and music stir the soul. Thank You!
My absolute pleasure Bella, thank you for your kind words.
Andy
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