The Sound, the Taste and Feel of Her Tongue
Don’t you just love the way
That her tongue
seems to clip
The roof of her mouth
when she
Whispers your name ..
And the way
that it tastes and it feels
upon yours ..
Yes to sip and to savour it
over and over ..
Oh’ lord, how I thank thee
it’s never the same
But unique and refreshing
thirst quenching
And otherwise welcome
given free at
The end of a very long day ..
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Should I meet her?! lol.
she is an ex & I believe ex directory .. but she has a non identical twin, believed to be older by just seven minutes .. I will go check and if I still have her number, it's yours ...... N 🙂
the torrid tingling of touching tongue tips tenderly mmmmm ...... rather near the top of my list in sensual matters.
Dammit my windows have steamed up.
Blimey ... is that both of em .............................................................................. N 🙂
So seriously sensual I could sip and savour each line - - so smoothly mmmmmmorish ..................x
You just concentrate on that wrist of yours young lady ........................ 🙂 x
Ha ha - -- O.K. Bosh...............x
'it’s never the same
But unique and refreshing
thirst quenching
And otherwise welcome
given free'..
what a poetic escape, gift
of a read
after such a gruelling week
of negativity
and dispiriting, reality..
(had my mind, skipping back
to
those now, cobwebbed
teenage years of spontaneous, crushes
where the slightest detail
was enough, fuel
for us to daydream, free
of life's bruises, as safety wheel
limitations...)
Glad to be of service Mek ........ and thank you for your most generous review ....... Neville
I guess, we are on the same theme , but
yours are so much more juicy! Lol
I meant the poem. 😀😍
Phew, I thought for a moment my secret was out ............... bless you Dove ........... 🙂
You've well captured the taste and the feel of a lovers tongue..I really enjoyed myself with this poem...C
So good to hear that C .................. many thank you's my friend .......................... N
They say you should trace your name with your tongue when kissing someone. So I'm guessing she must have like 10 middle names in order to have her kiss so memorable! 😅 Well done!
... I never knew that damn it .. but her name was Ann without an E .. and believe me, I tried to write my first anthology with her in mind ........................................... never mind eh .. thanks Rocky 🙂
Hot!! In the beginning I thought it was a continuation of your dog story! (The rudder and I got it wrong till the end).
well at least you got it write, before the beginning of the next one ............................. cheers Roz 🙂
So very true Neville.
Andy
Ah' ... short n crisp, just the way I like it my little golden wonder ................................... Neville 🙂
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