I shell never forget the part that was mine, crossing over the sands of time
Never alone with many spirits in mind, swirling to make any moment rhyme
I'll wave to the mystic from shores of unknown, casting a shadow wherever I roam.
Find it together or going solo, thanks for being on this rock to make it a happy home.
When my feet are grounded I feel connected to all, like a giant among many unable to fall.
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Just doing what I do inspired by all of you, here's to another round of rhymes to help pull us through. Keep up the write but most importantly being you!
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'Never alone
with many spirits in mind, swirling
to make any moment, rhyme
I'll wave
to the mystic from shores of unknown, casting
a shadow: wherever I roam.'
these lines, showcase
such sincere and bravely pure
poetic genius
distilled and unfurled, accessibly relatable
with Purpose!
'in my humble opinion'
(Brilliant!)
thank you! for choosing to share, dear Poet
You truly never fail to keep this wondering soul wanting to write on and never get old!
You my friend are one in a billion thats a gift to know!
Thank you as ever for your time.
I like this Dan , especially your last lines with mention of the giant .. it’s so important to feel grounded in life 🙂
Thank you my friend and I hope that feeling stays with me and passed on to you any time you feel to small to move.
So nice to see you
Nice pun with the first line! Also this poem was really gracious. I felt it and the imagery you bring up really ties in your message! Good one! 💖
Lol thank you, so many shell rhymes went off in my head. I only wanted one, was hard not to add one more at the end.
Thank you for joining on the journey as I enjoyed where it went.
Much peace and respect
Your poetry is so beautiful Dan,it brings me joy to read your work,
Nicely written.
Melissa Crown
For some reason your comment has just made me cry, I guess I'm still shocked others are glad to know what's on my mind.
Truly appreciate your precious time
Aww, you are sweet Dan, everything you say has importance,as does what you think, that is part of t the love of God my friend, nothing is not important
Supporting each other. Lovely poem.
Always appreciated thank you my friend
Keep up the write 😉
Good one Dan, may that connection always be with you.
Andy
Cheers buddy, have a great day
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