Wave to the mystic from shores of unknown

Poetic Dan

I shell never forget the part that was mine, crossing over the sands of time 

 

Never alone with many spirits in mind, swirling to make any moment rhyme 

 

I'll wave to the mystic from shores of unknown, casting a shadow wherever I roam. 

 

Find it together or going solo, thanks for being on this rock to make it a happy home. 

 

When my feet are grounded I feel connected to all, like a giant among many unable to fall. 

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 4th, 2022 06:37
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just doing what I do inspired by all of you, here's to another round of rhymes to help pull us through. Keep up the write but most importantly being you!
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 25
  • User favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek.
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Comments6

  • L. B. Mek

    'Never alone
    with many spirits in mind, swirling
    to make any moment, rhyme
    I'll wave
    to the mystic from shores of unknown, casting
    a shadow: wherever I roam.'
    these lines, showcase
    such sincere and bravely pure
    poetic genius
    distilled and unfurled, accessibly relatable
    with Purpose!
    'in my humble opinion'
    (Brilliant!)
    thank you! for choosing to share, dear Poet

    • Poetic Dan

      You truly never fail to keep this wondering soul wanting to write on and never get old!

      You my friend are one in a billion thats a gift to know!

      Thank you as ever for your time.

    • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

      I like this Dan , especially your last lines with mention of the giant .. it’s so important to feel grounded in life 🙂

      • Poetic Dan

        Thank you my friend and I hope that feeling stays with me and passed on to you any time you feel to small to move.

        So nice to see you

      • Rocky Lagou

        Nice pun with the first line! Also this poem was really gracious. I felt it and the imagery you bring up really ties in your message! Good one! 💖

        • Poetic Dan

          Lol thank you, so many shell rhymes went off in my head. I only wanted one, was hard not to add one more at the end.

          Thank you for joining on the journey as I enjoyed where it went.

          Much peace and respect

        • Crowns4Christ

          Your poetry is so beautiful Dan,it brings me joy to read your work,
          Nicely written.

          Melissa Crown

          • Poetic Dan

            For some reason your comment has just made me cry, I guess I'm still shocked others are glad to know what's on my mind.

            Truly appreciate your precious time

            • Crowns4Christ

              Aww, you are sweet Dan, everything you say has importance,as does what you think, that is part of t the love of God my friend, nothing is not important

            • Rozina

              Supporting each other. Lovely poem.

              • Poetic Dan

                Always appreciated thank you my friend
                Keep up the write 😉

              • Goldfinch60

                Good one Dan, may that connection always be with you.

                Andy

                • Poetic Dan

                  Cheers buddy, have a great day



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