Do you remember our kisses so sweet?
Like delicious honey-nectar so fine
When you were mine, I felt so complete
My soul did spins, I was dizzy on my feet
Oh baby, I would get chills down my spine
Do you remember our kisses so sweet?
With every pucker, I could feel your heat
The warmth of your lips , oh so sublime
When you were mine, I felt so complete
My heart danced a sweet loving beat
Oh yes, I was glad you were mine !
Do you remember our kisses so sweet?
Honey glazed lips such a joyous treat
Warm embraces , oh they felt divine
When you were mine, I felt so complete
I shall always love you my sweet
Your kisses forever engraved in my mind
Do you remember our kisses so sweet?
When you were mine, I felt so complete
- Author: Dove (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: March 4th, 2022 08:51
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 25
Comments8
Aha another villanelle... i'm thinking you're enjoying composing these - it shows in the end result here which is joyous and bounces along.
A delight to read, thank you.
Yes, I love the format.. Thanks for stopping by... Smiles
Ooof! The refrain "When you were mine, I felt so complete" really hits. I can almost sense that hole that must be lingering in the heart from the absence of the lover. But either way, a gracious villanelle and you once again executed it with finesse. 💖✨
Thanks Rocky, I think we alk have been blasted by love.. Thanks for the compliment
oh I love this style of poetry and you did it so well! I can sense that deep sense of loss you must be feeling where your lover used to be. Great poem!
Lovely words , dove )) sounds like a soulmate or a twin flame
I like your poem
Thanks Yellow Rose.. " Twin Flame"
nice words.. Perhaps an inspiration
for a poem.. Thanks for stopping by
I see what you mean Dove me luv .. but I must insist that yours are not only sweeter but bloomin neater and more completer ... too .......... 🙂 x
Thanks for the jingle... Made me smile
Ever so sweeter
Dove, you really are a master of the Villanelle, so very well formed.
And despite my misgivings re love poetry, these are on a totally different level. So smooth without an engineered adjustment in sight.
I tried one very early on. Found it extremely difficult.
Seems Villanelle was just waiting for you to come along.
Multi thanks.
Thanks Dave, it's good to get a love poem out once in awhile... Thanks for stopping by and giving my poem a try...
Smiles
Very good poem. Another type to learn about, this Villanelle. Thank you.
Rozina, thanks so much.. Yes , there's so many poetic forms out there... Glad you enjoyed the villanelle
Beautiful loving words Dove.
Andy
Thank you kindly as always Andy,
Very much appreciated
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.