Breathing poetry -
Isn’t for us all, but see,
Oxygen lacks charm.
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Author:
Rocky Lagou (
Offline) - Published: March 4th, 2022 11:57
- Comment from author about the poem: Hey! My third attempt at a haiku/senryū. Hope you enjoy this one! ✨😁
- Category: Haiku
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Haha,so true Rocky
Hii! I was kind of reflecting on why I chose to pursue poetry as my predominant pastime and aspiration and was quite lost for words when thinking for an answer. But then, I thought about that "charm" that poetry has that not even the air we breathe can beat. So this is the result. I'm glad to see you enjoyed! Have a wonderful day! 💖
That is completely true, there's just something about poetry that is indescribable,beauty like no other,it gives me a feeling of peace, especially writing about God and my husband
exhales slowly & sighs ................. 10/10 ........................... Neville
Yes Neville! Inhale/exhale poetry! hehe! Thanks so much for your kind review and rating it a 10/10 is so flattering. Thank you very much! Have a great day! ✨😅🙌
wonderful haiku senryu! I live and breathe poetry, this was excellent!
Hey! I'm so glad that you were able to see yourself in this poem! We all need a motivation to keep on going and poetry is such an encouraging one. Thanks so much for your uplifting words! Have a lovely day! 💖
You have a wonderful day as well Rocky!!
Love the poetry and I love the music core de lune it is a far reaching piece of music composed to inspire someone with a similar talent
Hey! Thanks so much for the comment, however, I think you may have responded to the wrong poem. Either way, I really appreciate your kind words, Claire De Lune is truly motivational and it possesses so much beauty. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed my attempt at putting into word. Have a lovely day! ✨
Good write R.
Hey! Thanks so much Orchidee! I'm delighted to see you enjoyed my poem and may you have a wonderful day! 💖🙌
I've got plenty of hot air in me to let out .
A nice write .
Hey! Thanks so much for the feedback! Be sure to inhale and exhale all that stress and continue to BREATHE poetry! Hehe! Have a good day! 💖
Very good Rocky. Keep on.
Hey! Thanks so much for dropping by, I really appreciate your kind words! Have a great day and continue writing as well my fellow poet! ✨
Good one Rocky.
Andy
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and I hope you have a lovely day! ✨☀
Well attempted, liked it.
Really, inspiring me to try 🙂
Hey! Thanks so much for your input! I'm delighted to see you enjoyed it and I'm also glad that you feel inspired to give it a shot! Go for it! 💕
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