Yellowness

Fay Slimm.

 

 

Yellowness.


With each advent of sun-showered yellow 
there steals
a springing of close-headed gold denseness 
in nearby fields.

Daffodil time comes frilly with captured
mass meaning
packed with herald heads and nodding 
gilt greetings.

Breathing in sunshine whatever the sky 
I bend to eye level
lie down in an ocean of yellowness 
and pretend to be floating then drown
in Spring-coloured bliss.

A yearly looked-for experience is this.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 7th, 2022 04:57
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments9

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    Beautiful poem , Fay .. just lovely 🙂🌸

  • L. B. Mek

    'A yearly looked-for experience is this.'
    just like your poetry's:
    weekly, looked-for reading experience, dear Fay
    what a Time, to ink such vivid words
    reminding us
    of Nature's hope fuelling, majestic beauty

  • dusk arising

    I have not been out among the fields of Daffodils for two years now.... so whoopee ... am I ever looking forward to seeing thema again and later on those carpets of bluebells among the trees.
    Oh come on the springtime.... light me up in spirit.
    A really uplifting read today thank you.

  • Neville


    I have done that self same thing Fay, tho' I doubt so pretty or as daintily as thee ................. a delightful poem with a golden hue that stays behind my lids when I close my eyes ............... Neville x

    • Fay Slimm.

      Thought you may have laid down at eye level and soaked in the essence of a whole field of daffs........... takes a romantic to think of doing that eh ? - - -
      - - thanks a plenty for the generous review Nev.................x

    • Rocky Lagou

      The images were so vivid and I was transported into a yellow paradise! Thank you!

    • Christina8

      A wonderful poem with a stunning picture....as I look out my window this morning the world is covered in a blanket of snow. Can't wait to see wildflowers, etc! Thank you for that little bit of spring!

    • Rozina

      Stunning! I've only seen this in a formal garden but would love to see a field of daffodils as in your lovely poem.

    • Goldfinch60

      It is a wonderful time, even my daffodils are coming out and it is a glorious sign of spring.

      Andy

    • SureshG

      Unbuttoning the winter coat, and allowing its seed to sprout. Yearning for the rays of Sun, to welcome the change of season, and lay down a carpet of yellow, that only so poetic words as yours could display



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