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dusk arising

 

 

I ain't one to blow my own trumpet
maybe because i play saxophone
yes I tried a trumpet but.....
anyway, I digress cos
I just did something I'm rather proud of
cos there's been times along the way
when i wondered if I'd ever achieve it
my older brother didn't though I wish he had
cos my sisters, mum and dad did it too
I woke up today to find I'd made it to seventy
hey-ho I'm celebrating
A nice nurse doing an ECG on me 
wished me a happy birthday this morning
though a cardiologist was indifferent
I'm hoping my van passes it's MOT this afternoon too
I haven't been big on birthdays
but I'm pleased to be having this one
so go on...  say it...

 

 

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  • Fay Slimm.

    Let me be first then -- my dear dear Dusky - from me HAPPY BIRTHDAY and may this be the start of wonderful things ahead for both your van and yourself. - - huggles galore. x x x x

    • dusk arising

      Thank you Fay. I have a posh car too. The van is my old work van which i had been hoping to convert into a camper van. But camper vans have gained such bad press over the last couple of years and most of the free overnight park-up places have now had restrictions put on them. So car-camping will be my intent for the near future. Oh to get away in fine weather. I've promised myself a day out in a favourite place tomorrow.

    • L. B. Mek

      Ha!
      seems we're days apart, my fellow Pisces
      I'll toast
      to your zeal, for life
      that trait, to look at bleak reality
      head-on
      and still, Choose to Fight!
      how I laud, your bravery
      in wording your poetry with Hope, whenever you can!
      Here's to you, Dusk
      and to the fortitude, of goodness
      prevailing over ill-fate's circumstance
      cheer's, I wish you a year full of painless breaths
      and sunshine smiles, adorned by those you love
      and of course
      an endless, deluge of inspiration
      to fuel, your insightful Poetry...
      to your health! ๐Ÿป

    • screaming goat. (New and Improved)

      Congrats on being old!

    • Poetic Dan

      What a pleasure and gift to say happy birthday you old git! I'm sure brother is proud of how far you've stuck with it! Here's to plenty more once you've finished playing nurses.

      Many happy returns again and thank for blowing that trumpet or sax lol

    • Neville


      Happy Birthday Big Fella I shall raise my glass to you this very eve and wish you all the very best of all good things and seriously improved general health and circumstances in the coming years .........................Yours sincerely Neville ......................... ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Christina8

      Happy Birthday dear Dusk!! I hope for many more for you! Wonderful write.

    • Rocky Lagou

      Wow! 70 years YOUNG! And much much many to go! What a delight it must be! Happy Birthday Dusk! ๐Ÿ’–

    • Laura๐ŸŒป

      Dear Dusk,

      Today I wish you a very HAPPY BIRTHDAY and many more to come!๐Ÿ‘๐ŸŽˆ๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰ ๐Ÿง๐Ÿ’ You are such an inspiration. I applaud you. Reading your poetry is infectious. It makes any of us appreciate each day we are gifted withโ€ฆno matter our circumstances.

      Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Reading your scripted words always gives me hope.

      Laura๐ŸŒป

    • Doggerel Dave

      Yeh? Well then, Happy Birthday, dusk....................I hate to boast, but..........

    • Rozina

      Happy Birthday Dusk. Wishing you a lovely day and a great year ahead.

    • Goldfinch60

      So you youngster you have reached the new 40 in life where life begins again, I reached it just over three years ago.
      Many happy returns d a may you life be filled with your dreams.

      Andy

    • SureshG

      More than just wishing you a HAPPY BIRTHDAY, may I wish you a full and speedy recovery, to enjoy to the fullest your hearts wishes.



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