Be To Me.
Be to me eternity's song
and not as lust's transient notes.
Be as the forever of strong
affection and not just for moments.
Be like faith without limit
and not as doubt's breakable bond.
Be to me true as infinity
for heaven applauds trustful resolve.
Be alive to ageless passion
and not just in first blush of youth.
Be to me need ever lasting
for such keeps alive love's lit beauty.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: March 9th, 2022 06:39
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Good write Fay.
Aww, why 'they' say to me: 'Be to me one who never sings'?! It's not the words, it's me out of tune. heehee.
Thank you for your visit and comment dear Orchi.
... splendiferous aint a word I have ever used before .. in fact, I'm not sure it is a recognised word at all, but I have no doubt the lady with the golden nibs shall get my drift ... x
You crease me up and no doubt you know it - - - golden nibs eh - - well nuff said but am gettin your drift and smiling big here................ x
Be my rock, the one who is my always. Be the end of doubt and the pleasure of each dawn.
Wow you struck a chord in me today. Me, the one who has given up, decided henceforth is a path to be taken alone for my sanity's sake. But look what i just wrote. Speaks of a desire put aside. Yep, this one landed on me like a ton of bricks. Beautifully written Fay. Well done and thank you.
Into my favourites of course.
I am delighted to have struck a chord with this poem dear Dusk and hope the fallen bricks do no harm to your present decisions. Thanks too for considering the read worth putting into your favourite list.
A wishful desire of “Be to Me” arouse as I went through those lines
And suddenly I realised so many wishes still hang on the cliffs of my life
Very well inked dear Fay
Yes, I agree with your sentiments written so elegantly as always.
We will all be everlasting for you Fay.
Andy
Amen! This was truly such a heartfelt composition of words you conveyed exquisitely. Give yourself a pat on the back, you deserve it!
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