I look out of my window
Into dawns early light,
And there before me it shone,
The moon shone on me,
It shone on my life.
All was good in my life
As I had got up this day.
Another day of wonder,
Wonder to be found
That I find in every day.
Each day I see her,
I see the new love,
The new love of my life.
Our love so strong
And getting stronger,
Stronger every moment,
Every moment we are together.
A love that we share
With such strength.
From where did that love come,
We just do not know.
But it is with us
And will always be with us.
And this day
I got up and the moon shone,
Shone on our love.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I looked out of my bedroom window when I got up and the full moon shone on me.
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Good write Gold.
It was an orange day for us here yesterday. It was sand dust from the Sahara. Seems to have cleared now. You have any orange skies? Not meaning sunset though.
Thanks Orchi.
No no orange skies, just solid rain from about 10:30am all flaming day.
Andy
We had rain quite a bit of the day, but it was a yellow/orange day - strange. Ahh, a flaming day! lol.
Long may the gifts of life be present in your eyes and surround you with fulfillment. Shine on!
Thank you d a , I certainly hope so.
Andy
A wonderful and uplifting read dear Andy and showing where appreciation results in so many good things to love
Most kind Fay, thank you.
Andy
that moon, is such a generous conduit
to our poetic surmise, of the wondrous
in our lives...
(this was such a soothing, read
dear wise Poet
really liked the gentleness in tone and pacing)
oh and good on you for resisting 'moon river'
as the soundtrack to your poem, lol
Thank you Mek, much appreciated.
Andy
Yes what a fine romance. I love this poem and your imagery and tone is forever embedded in this masterpiece. ✨
Thank you for your wonderfully kind words Rocky.
Andy
Congratulations on the love you found and that it continues to thrive and get stronger. Great write!
Thank you Christina, that love is certainly getting stronger every moment.
Andy
Such a sincere and genuine expression of love and gratitude. absolutely beautiful
Most kind Arvy, thank you.
Andy
This poem does your romantic sensibility justice. It is beautiful! The last few days of the full moon I've stood outside early and late just to gaze at it, and I can appreciate your inspiration in it.
Thank you Bella, the moon certainly does always give me inspiration.
Andy
So sweet Andy, I pray that God smiles when he watches over you my friend
Thank you Melissa, I am sure our god is with us.
Andy
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