Portals in the mind

Poetic Dan



It's that special kind of shine, that creates portals in the mind

Let no body tell you how to find the sublime, it may be a squeeze but you're not out of time

Each step taken puts us right on the edge, to roll with the tide or make castles instead

For the sessions bring change and I'm doing my best

To come out from this dark winter and bloom with the rest

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 17th, 2022 09:50
  • Comment from author about the poem: It's warming up and so are my thoughts. I thank the crystal clear sea and the stones under my feet this morning for together we made rhymes to transform our mind into peaceful times...
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  • Caring dove

    Lovely poem , Dan 🙂

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you my friend, love the name. Today is a good day, hope its shining your way too.

      • Caring dove

        Yes , today is a better day for me too .. In some ways . I did some kundalini yoga with my twin sister .. you know I think it helped. First time done yoga in a while ., mostly calm today which is nice ,

        Glad todays a good day for you too !

        • Caring dove

          Yes , violet bluebell .. I prefer the name

        • Christina8

          Yes, bravo!!! Even here in Michigan it's warmer and the ice is melting. Such a beautiful day here as well. I like the last line for those of us that are coming out of a dark winter, we are blooming. Thanks for sharing!

          • Poetic Dan

            No snow or ice for us in many years, I just love the longer days. So nice to see your glow, keep up the write my friend.

            Always appreciated

          • dusk arising

            Teddy is successfully fighting off covid with bow and arrow but has taken to replacing the arrow with a gondoliers pole..... ... the gondolier wasn't available for comment but has taken to strolling his hometown in denim. Venice in blue jeans.

            • Poetic Dan

              I'm sure a spirit like hers can rise above all things my friend but definitely wishing her my best. Think you lost me on your ending but sounded great in my head lol

              Always appreciated

            • Rocky Lagou

              A heartwarming poem! I feel this setting you transport the reader in. Great job!

              • Poetic Dan

                May we fly to the unknown to create poetry from the soul..
                Thank you for the inspiration and joining the journey lol

              • Crowns4Christ

                That's the funny thing with our minds,they can make us or break us,show us truth or illusion,and we have to separate fact from fiction, fantasy from reality,but most gets stuck somewhere in between

                • Poetic Dan

                  Yeah it's why it's good to just stop and have tea, remember none of it matters. At least we are on the journey!

                  Thank you for your time
                  Always appreciated

                • Goldfinch60

                  That dark winter is now behind you Dan and the light in your life is ahead of you.

                  Andy

                • Bella Shepard

                  Thank you for this lovely homage to spring! I poked my head out of my cave and found that the world is still there, full of hope. Love the sentiment of your poem.



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