Blush

Neville

Blush

 

She wore her silk kimono well, less on than off

and a smile too that hid

cruel winter’s first near cherry blossom blush ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 23rd, 2022 02:59
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments8

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    Good writing ! I love spring

    • Neville



      .. well that makes at least two of us VB maybe we should have a party .................. 🙂

    • Paul Bell

      Just saw big Mary passing by, not wearing much. The sooner we get back to winter, the better.

      • Neville



        should have gone to Specsavers ...................... maybe 🙂

      • Fay Slimm.

        Spring-filled imagery to sigh for in this little gem - I love the cherry-tree personification with blossom certainly more off than on..... great read Nev.

        • Neville



          Thank you kindly Fay ..................................................................... n truly tooly too 🙂 x

        • orchidee

          Good write N.
          KP keeps getting her kimono out, but it don't do anything for me. lol.
          If I see Big Mary as Paul did, I shall swoon! Season of beached whales? lol.

          • Neville



            I don't have a clue wot either of you guys are on ............................... or about 🙂

            • orchidee

              Well, it's if we see certain chubby folk in warm weather - it can be ghastly, and put you off your dinner! That's why Paul is wanting winter to return soon. We won't 'see the sights' then. lol.

            • Christina8

              This is a great tribute to Spring. The cherry blossoms are blooming. You said it better! LOL c

              • Neville



                thank you C ............................................... N 🙂 x

              • Michael Edwards

                What colour was the Cherry Blossom? I've got black and brown and grey. But I've not got any grey leather - love the write by the way.

                • Neville



                  I was a little slow off the mark Michael .. but then, I saw the light ........... what a polished act you are sir ....................................................................................................thank you terribly 🙂

                • Laura🌻

                  Neville,

                  ‘Blush’(ing) 🌸 while reading……..the comments…that is!
                  Nice one! 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸

                  Laura🌻

                  • Neville



                    I kinda dig what you are saying & deeply I thank thee ............................................... Neville 🙂 🌻x

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Good opening for spring Neville.

                    Andy

                    • Neville



                      its that time of year again innit ................................................. cheers Andy 🙂



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