Suddenly you go Elusive
I am no wonder Reclusive
Missing your comments, Amusive
Always leave me Compulsive
This is not Impulsive but Effusive
Because we are Mutually Inclusive
Longing YOU, which is Addictive
MISS You !!
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Author:
Vamsi Sudha (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Emotions of Missing someone Dear !!
- Category: Love
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- Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, spilleronsheet.
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Comments6
an impactful shorty
thanks for sharing, dear poet
Glad your liked it Dear Mek !! Thank You !!
Beautiful and sharp!
Thanks Poet for commenting !! 🙂
Thank you!
Yearning is definitely such a nagging thing. It could also be a nice reminder though. Like your assonance though!
Thanks a "load' Rocky !! You surely resonate my feeling !!
Fine emotive words VS.
Andy
Thanks Gold !!
A beautiful piece
And a sincere call
So well worded my dear
Couldn’t stop by getting attracted to its core
I found myself hooking to your lines
As if I was being missed in those times
Very beautiful dear Vamsi
Each word yearned
Wedded with emotions in each line
Hey Dear Spiller, Glad you liked the poem a lot !! Thanks taking time to read despite your busy exam schedules 🙂 touched. !!
I'm thinking you're missing him, though not conclusive, is he elusive on purpose.
That was a poetic response dear Paul !! Thanks a lot !!
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