MISS You !!!

Vamsi Sudha

Suddenly you go Elusive
I am no wonder Reclusive
Missing your comments, Amusive 
Always leave me Compulsive
This is not Impulsive but Effusive
Because we are Mutually Inclusive
Longing YOU, which is Addictive

MISS You !!

 

  • Author: Vamsi Sudha (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 29th, 2022 03:31
  • Comment from author about the poem: Emotions of Missing someone Dear !!
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 23
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, spilleronsheet
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  • L. B. Mek

    an impactful shorty
    thanks for sharing, dear poet

    • Vamsi Sudha

      Glad your liked it Dear Mek !! Thank You !!

    • 1LovePebbles

      Beautiful and sharp!

      • Vamsi Sudha

        Thanks Poet for commenting !! 🙂

        • 1LovePebbles

          Thank you!

        • Rocky Lagou

          Yearning is definitely such a nagging thing. It could also be a nice reminder though. Like your assonance though!

          • Vamsi Sudha

            Thanks a "load' Rocky !! You surely resonate my feeling !!

          • Goldfinch60

            Fine emotive words VS.

            Andy

          • spilleronsheet

            A beautiful piece
            And a sincere call
            So well worded my dear
            Couldn’t stop by getting attracted to its core
            I found myself hooking to your lines
            As if I was being missed in those times
            Very beautiful dear Vamsi
            Each word yearned
            Wedded with emotions in each line

            • Vamsi Sudha

              Hey Dear Spiller, Glad you liked the poem a lot !! Thanks taking time to read despite your busy exam schedules 🙂 touched. !!

            • Paul Bell

              I'm thinking you're missing him, though not conclusive, is he elusive on purpose.

              • Vamsi Sudha

                That was a poetic response dear Paul !! Thanks a lot !!



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