As I near the top of the mountain I stand tall in stature.
My focus remains straight forward taking in the sights around me.
The birds sing the sacred song to my heart as I keep moving forward.
Butterflies grace me with their magnificence guiding me forward.
The sunshine scares the shadows away as I keep walking straight forward.
I walk with my arms straight out embracing the magic inside of me.
I feel the shifts inside of me as I progress higher on the mountain.
I don’t look down, I don’t look backward, and I don’t look up.
I don’t focus on the people ahead of me who are rushing to the top.
I just focus on the sounds of nature all around me.
I just focus on the breathing sounds matching the beats of my heart.
I just focus on the sounds that my footsteps are making with each step forward.
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Destiny\'s Perspective (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 31st, 2022 01:01
- Category: Spiritual
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Lovely poem ) to listen to the sounds of nature
Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed reading it!
'I don’t look down, I don’t look backward, and I don’t look up.
I don’t focus on the people ahead of me who are rushing to the top.
I just focus on the sounds of nature all around me.
I just focus on the breathing sounds matching the beats of my heart.'
(for me the title of this write
will always be:
'When you boldly, own
whatever Faith, system
you Choose
to empower, that meaningful
worth
in, your life!')
such a great message!
thanks for sharing
Thank for such a kind comment! It means a lot when someone truly takes the time to understand the message behind the poem. I really put all of my inner wisdom in the poems I write in hopes that it teaches others a different light of seeing things. I am a very spiritual person rather then religious and a lot of times it comes out in what I write. I try not to sound too preachy but at the end of the day people will always take what they want from anything you create.
Yes! Such a beautiful and optimistic message. We must always continue forward in life and truly try to embrace every moment. Very well done and I love the analogy you used to convey the poem. 💖
Thank for your lovely commentary on the poem and I am pleased that you enjoyed it's message. My favorite poems to write are the ones that uplift people.
Beautifully written & true
an enjoyable read...
Dahlia
Aww thank you! I am so happy that you enjoyed reading it! I hope to see your comments on future poems.
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