-somemore 5-7-5 thoughts-

dean langmuir

Seven Senryus

sitting on a shelf subdued

waiting for your time

 

Liberating poems

words used the way they were meant

cathartic lightbulbs

 

Violins go thru me

what is inside these people

projecting these notes

 

Mysterious moss

absorbs my unlit shadows

relieving my soles

 

I see straight thru you

your complexity intrigues

then becomes a poem

 

Why expose me now

people can wait to see me

I hope I am brave

 

In my hermit cave

thank you Maya for the paint

I am poetry

 

A pot worthy thought

my daffodil said to me

blooming as it spoke

 

Life,share your essence

Please,bless me with your knowledge

I will pass it on

 

Emerging ziegiest

understand the new ambience

know your ethos

 

May I Ubuntu

thank you Africa for this

simplification

 

  • Author: dean langmuir (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 1st, 2022 08:00
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  • Rocky Lagou

    I love your 5-7-5's! I feel sticking to any meter is quite the challenge and to see you just do this with ease is inspiring. My favorite line is "Violins go thru me," a real spiritual breakthrough!

  • dean langmuir

    Thank you Rocky,more to come,take care.

  • orchidee

    Good Haikus there Dean. Bit of French? Haiku? I never did study languages much! lol.

    • dean langmuir

      Thank you O for reading I really have fun letting them flow,take care.

    • Dahlia

      once again you did it, poet
      these are amazing!
      Dahlia

      • dean langmuir

        Thank you,Dahlia,just fun letting them flow out,take care.

      • Goldfinch60

        Good senryus Dean.

        Andy



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