When I caress your mocha skin
we combine to make milk chocolate dew
My contours fit yours exactly
A puzzle done by very few
It matters not that it's snowing
Our heat will keep us warm
Our hands linked together
Pure sweet romantic form
My heart pounds as you trace
my alabaster form with your fingers
The scent of you is stuck in
my brain and the musk lingers
I'm simply lost in you, that
dimpled grin gives me reason to smile
Because we're leaving this behind
Going away on a trip for a while.
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 1st, 2022 08:47
- Category: Love
- Views: 43
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Comments6
You're lost, lost in a love supreme. Enjoy.
Yes, I am. Thank you for your comment, have a great weekend!
Okay I think this may be my favorite poem of yours. "When I caress your MOCHA skin." 'MOCHA SKIN!" You see this right here is a level of poetry that just can't be attained. That analogy of how you and your lover's grooves and curves fit like a "puzzle," a freaking JIGSAW PUZZLE! I'm "going away on a trip for a while," a trip to your mind!
Thank You so much for the credit you give me! I cannot begin to tell you how much this review means to me. yeah, MPS needs to update their pictures to include interracial couples, don't you think? The jigsaw puzzle was something my husband mentioned so I have to give him credit. You are so kind. Can't wait to review your poem for today!!!
Oh tell me about the lack of diversity on MPS. I mean to begin with, I found it disrespectful that you could only choose "male" or "female" when creating an account. I personally am not gender-neutral but I felt that that would've just been a slap in the face for those poets who identify as such. A revolution still needs to come
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Ahh, you remembered when we met! lol (Do shut up sometimes Orchi).
Ha ha! Thanks for stopping by my page today Orchi! Appreciated!
Phew - I did not swoon! hehe.
Beautiful words of love Christina.
Andy
Thank you kindly, Andy!
Long May it last Christina together with the happiness
Thank you so much William, I appreciate the read!
Very romantic well worded with great images and metaphors. It flowed well and was enjoyable to read.
Thank You sorenbarrett!! I appreciate your kind comments!
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