Romantic

Christina8

When I caress your mocha skin

we combine to make milk chocolate dew

My contours fit yours exactly

A puzzle done by very few

 

It matters not that it's snowing

Our heat will keep us warm

Our hands linked together

Pure sweet romantic form

 

My heart pounds as you trace

my alabaster form with your fingers

The scent of you is stuck in

my brain and the musk lingers

 

I'm simply lost in you, that

dimpled grin gives me reason to smile

Because we're leaving this behind

Going away on a trip for a while.

  • Author: Christina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 1st, 2022 08:47
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 43
  • Users favorite of this poem: Rocky Lagou
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  • dusk arising

    You're lost, lost in a love supreme. Enjoy.

    • Christina8

      Yes, I am. Thank you for your comment, have a great weekend!

    • Rocky Lagou

      Okay I think this may be my favorite poem of yours. "When I caress your MOCHA skin." 'MOCHA SKIN!" You see this right here is a level of poetry that just can't be attained. That analogy of how you and your lover's grooves and curves fit like a "puzzle," a freaking JIGSAW PUZZLE! I'm "going away on a trip for a while," a trip to your mind!

      • Christina8

        Thank You so much for the credit you give me! I cannot begin to tell you how much this review means to me. yeah, MPS needs to update their pictures to include interracial couples, don't you think? The jigsaw puzzle was something my husband mentioned so I have to give him credit. You are so kind. Can't wait to review your poem for today!!!

        • Rocky Lagou

          Oh tell me about the lack of diversity on MPS. I mean to begin with, I found it disrespectful that you could only choose "male" or "female" when creating an account. I personally am not gender-neutral but I felt that that would've just been a slap in the face for those poets who identify as such. A revolution still needs to come

          • Crowns4Christ

            Dion and myself are a interracial couple, I couldn't agree more

          • orchidee

            Ahh, you remembered when we met! lol (Do shut up sometimes Orchi).

            • Christina8

              Ha ha! Thanks for stopping by my page today Orchi! Appreciated!

              • orchidee

                Phew - I did not swoon! hehe.

              • Goldfinch60

                Beautiful words of love Christina.

                Andy

                • Christina8

                  Thank you kindly, Andy!

                • Quijote

                  Long May it last Christina together with the happiness

                  • Christina8

                    Thank you so much William, I appreciate the read!

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Very romantic well worded with great images and metaphors. It flowed well and was enjoyable to read.

                    • Christina8

                      Thank You sorenbarrett!! I appreciate your kind comments!



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