HEAR THE SOUND

Michael Edwards

 

 

HEAR THE SOUND

 

Short poem with rhyme pattern in front of each line

(in ABBA format). Harder to write than I anticipated.

 

Hear the sound as

Pain recedes and

Rain falls softly

Clear and sparkling

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 3rd, 2022 01:05
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments5

  • Goldfinch60

    Fine words Michael, may that clear and sparkling way be forever with you.

    Andy

  • orchidee

    Good write M.
    Any easier rhyming at the end of lines? What's Miss Berles advice on this?! lol.

  • dusk arising

    That's clever stuff. I will have a go at similar one day but today i'm too weak willed LOL.

    Urine, clear and sparkling
    Flushed with success.

    • Michael Edwards

      Prostate enlarged
      wee slowly discharged.

      • dusk arising

        Did I say weak willed or weak-willied.

        musical chairs
        damaged crotchets
        Piano stool
        grand constipation

      • dean langmuir

        Enjoyed poem and comments too,take care

      • Christina8

        Love the rhyme format! Beautiful!
        Christina



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