HEAR THE SOUND
Short poem with rhyme pattern in front of each line
(in ABBA format). Harder to write than I anticipated.
Hear the sound as
Pain recedes and
Rain falls softly
Clear and sparkling
- Author: Michael Edwards ( Offline)
- Published: April 3rd, 2022 01:05
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 24
Comments5
Fine words Michael, may that clear and sparkling way be forever with you.
Andy
Good write M.
Any easier rhyming at the end of lines? What's Miss Berles advice on this?! lol.
That's clever stuff. I will have a go at similar one day but today i'm too weak willed LOL.
Urine, clear and sparkling
Flushed with success.
Prostate enlarged
wee slowly discharged.
Did I say weak willed or weak-willied.
musical chairs
damaged crotchets
Piano stool
grand constipation
Enjoyed poem and comments too,take care
Love the rhyme format! Beautiful!
Christina
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