The song
played again and again
in loops over time
it mentioned about lovers
lovers lost in each other
but for her journey became everything
her destination love
her manifestations
her yearnings
a person with no religion
but only her deeds
which became her religion
the song
of passion
the song
of perfection
craving of her desires
the generally satisfied soul
lost her calm
like shore yearning for waves
to touch her
to caress her
like the breeze
gently blowing the hair on her face
the song
playing in loops
again and again…..
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Another great poem spiller .. 🙂 I guess we can lose our calm in love .. especially love your mention of the shore yearning for the waves
Thanks dear violet
In those scenes often we loose ourselves..
Another great work from you..
Loved these line..
a person with no religion
but only her deeds
which became her religion
Good one as usual Spiller 🙂
Thanks a lot dear Vamsi…when karma is the only dharma…
That's a beautiful statement .
There is a lot wrong with the organised religions, not least the way they capture immature minds and ensnare them with clever use of fear.
Just as you portray, a thinking person will become a spiritual thinking person purely from living life. Life in all it's forms around us and our own path through life is a great teaching experience. Who among us would not sit among the hills or at the sea shore or beneath the stars and not be moved in a spiritual manner.
Love, be it romantic love, love of living or love of our planets gifts, is a spiritual sensation. Something a christian (I'm not one) would call a gift from god.
Indeed dear dusk
As the time passes
And age dawns towards the evening
The wisdom grows abound
Realising what true spirituality is at core
Just like the beautiful words you mentioned in the comment
Much appreciated
Music is like that it can bring such wonderful emotions to us.
Andy
It sure is
It brings relief
It brings solution
It’s a cure to so many ailments
I do love a song on repeat, looping and reminder of a life so sweet!
Thanks for sharing
Thanks dear Poetic Dan…glad I could struck a chord…yep indeed a music in loop
Quite the song, indeed. I must say that line about what we do becoming our religion is actually such a genius and wise line. What we often commit to becomes a tedious task that really reflects the religious rites. Very well done.
Thanks dear rocky, you caught the essence of these lines…you sure have hawk’s eye….
as far as poems go, this is so damned good .. the bar is clearly and cleanly raised and I most certainly, applaud thee ........... N
Thank you so much dear Neville…your words set a higher bar for me….for me write more better and better….
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