The song

spilleronsheet

The song 

played again and again 

in loops over time 

it mentioned about lovers 

lovers lost in each other 

but for  her journey became everything 

 

her destination love 

her manifestations 

her yearnings

 

a person with no religion 

but only her deeds 

which became her religion

 

the song 

of passion 

the song 

of perfection 

craving of her desires

 

the generally satisfied soul

lost her calm 

like shore yearning for waves 

to touch her 

to caress her 

like the breeze 

gently blowing the hair on her face 

 

 

the song 

playing in loops

again and again….. 

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  • Caring dove

    Another great poem spiller .. 🙂 I guess we can lose our calm in love .. especially love your mention of the shore yearning for the waves

    • spilleronsheet

      Thanks dear violet
      In those scenes often we loose ourselves..

    • Vamsi Sudha

      Another great work from you..
      Loved these line..
      a person with no religion
      but only her deeds
      which became her religion

      Good one as usual Spiller 🙂

      • spilleronsheet

        Thanks a lot dear Vamsi…when karma is the only dharma…

        • Vamsi Sudha

          That's a beautiful statement .

        • dusk arising

          There is a lot wrong with the organised religions, not least the way they capture immature minds and ensnare them with clever use of fear.

          Just as you portray, a thinking person will become a spiritual thinking person purely from living life. Life in all it's forms around us and our own path through life is a great teaching experience. Who among us would not sit among the hills or at the sea shore or beneath the stars and not be moved in a spiritual manner.

          Love, be it romantic love, love of living or love of our planets gifts, is a spiritual sensation. Something a christian (I'm not one) would call a gift from god.

          • spilleronsheet

            Indeed dear dusk
            As the time passes
            And age dawns towards the evening
            The wisdom grows abound
            Realising what true spirituality is at core
            Just like the beautiful words you mentioned in the comment
            Much appreciated

          • Goldfinch60

            Music is like that it can bring such wonderful emotions to us.

            Andy

            • spilleronsheet

              It sure is
              It brings relief
              It brings solution
              It’s a cure to so many ailments

            • Poetic Dan

              I do love a song on repeat, looping and reminder of a life so sweet!
              Thanks for sharing

              • spilleronsheet

                Thanks dear Poetic Dan…glad I could struck a chord…yep indeed a music in loop

              • Rocky Lagou

                Quite the song, indeed. I must say that line about what we do becoming our religion is actually such a genius and wise line. What we often commit to becomes a tedious task that really reflects the religious rites. Very well done.

                • spilleronsheet

                  Thanks dear rocky, you caught the essence of these lines…you sure have hawk’s eye….

                • Neville



                  as far as poems go, this is so damned good .. the bar is clearly and cleanly raised and I most certainly, applaud thee ........... N

                  • spilleronsheet

                    Thank you so much dear Neville…your words set a higher bar for me….for me write more better and better….



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