Before it Hurts Too Much to See

Neville

Before it Hurts Too Much to See

 

Before it hurts too much to see, dear lord

let me gaze upon slow

and sketch both her likeness and silhouette

just one more time

and then, I can go blind, more than willingly ..

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 13th, 2022 03:49
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments5

  • orchidee

    A fine write N.

    • Neville



      Oh' that's fine then Mr. O ....................................................... N 🙂

    • Fay Slimm.

      Saddest of subjects this five line prayerful appeal for one final look at who love has gifted to one losing sight will bring a great lump to the throat and a tear to the eye of any reader -- a more than emotive write my friend.........x

      • Neville



        thank you for your understanding & insight my dear friend .................................. Neville x

      • spilleronsheet

        An intense romance, a sincere love and tragic ending
        You made a tragic movie
        Bringing tears to eyes
        A fine and emotive work dear Neville

        • Neville



          thank you for the thumbs up & for the smile you are responsible for helping form across this tired old face 🙂 x

        • Michael Edwards

          loads of punch in a small serving - super.................

          • Neville



            thank you Michael, you really are most kind & of course, always appreciated .. Neville

          • Goldfinch60

            Beautiful words Neville.

            Andy

            • Neville



              cheers Andy & a cheers well spent sir ... N



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