Before it Hurts Too Much to See
Before it hurts too much to see, dear lord
let me gaze upon slow
and sketch both her likeness and silhouette
just one more time
and then, I can go blind, more than willingly ..
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: April 13th, 2022 03:49
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A fine write N.
Oh' that's fine then Mr. O ....................................................... N 🙂
Saddest of subjects this five line prayerful appeal for one final look at who love has gifted to one losing sight will bring a great lump to the throat and a tear to the eye of any reader -- a more than emotive write my friend.........x
thank you for your understanding & insight my dear friend .................................. Neville x
An intense romance, a sincere love and tragic ending
You made a tragic movie
Bringing tears to eyes
A fine and emotive work dear Neville
thank you for the thumbs up & for the smile you are responsible for helping form across this tired old face 🙂 x
loads of punch in a small serving - super.................
thank you Michael, you really are most kind & of course, always appreciated .. Neville
Beautiful words Neville.
Andy
cheers Andy & a cheers well spent sir ... N
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