There maybe chaos
war ringing the ears
storms hitting the shores
mayhem of financial loss
everyone seems distressed
while soul seems stressed
amidst their pains
they hardly see, no one gains
in pains one cry
held stern forever in life
held with no head high
fallen esteem
shook everyday in life
why don’t you notice
life has become living hell,
have been trying
meeting so many trials in life
yet you despise
fail to notice the howling cries
how to make a notice
is it a commodity that can be sold
if only pain could be sold
but why would anyone buy ?
the sufferings inside….
please
look,
tattered soul
walks soulless
with brine washing the face
what is left behind
is a mere breathe of air….
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Comments7
Wow. This is quite the poem dear Spiller. I feel so many will resonate with your words. Nowadays, the world has sadly fallen into madness and insensitivity, and it seems like it's only getting worse. People are drowning in their own sadness and that light at the end of the tunnel seems to be dying out for many. I can only hope for better days.
Amen
May the light shine sooner
Help those engulfed by darkness
May the torch of knowledge and enlightenment shine
And humanity blooms in all mind
Thanks dear Rocky for understanding me so well….
Maybe it's ageing, but the world I came of age in seems to have vanished. Technology is a wonderful thing, but the extent to which it has evolved seems to have robbed us of a sense of oneness, and we are now these independent entities vying for constant attention any way we can get it. Our ears hear, but don't listen. Our eyes see, but don't acknowledge. You've said this in a very powerful way, and we need to keep listening and seeing what is right under our noses. Thank you!
That’s a beautiful comment dear Bella full of wisdom….adding to the meaning to my lines how you beautifully stated…its a pity that the world is turning more sour day by day…more rotten and the hope inside flickers of a better today…
A powerful message of the current despair. Unbearably sad times for so many.
So true dear Rozina…hope the dim light in present despair….
May peace come to us all and we can breathe that fresh air in humility.
Andy
Amen
I hope so
Truly awaiting for that dawn to appear
the message you post here is far bigger and more important than the page you pinned it to .. N
Thanks dear Neville
So many thoughts
Poetries full of wisdom pour around
I can feel the grief of so many
But I don’t know what can be the solution to this mayhem
Each corner of this globe is in pain
And so many sufferings building everyday
Don’t know what’s the solution
Or when shall it stop
I'm captivated by this poem where pain and strain on the souls leave us walking dead. The last line, 'is a mere breathe of air'; looks like the end and start. The ending; is why I still have a breath after all the ache and agony with the want to stop everything. The starting; where despite; all that, you have a chance to breathe for a change; Leading to new experiences. Poetic beauty!😊
My words were just pebbles around
You made them sound jewels
Essentially catching the essence
Thanks dear Bubblehead for this wonderful review
Dear Spiller
Touched totally with these lines..
how to make a notice
is it a commodity that can be sold
if only pain could be sold
but why would anyone buy ?
the sufferings inside….
I could perceive the pain you have gone through and each word of yours speaks the pain which people are facing.
Everyone feels, but a poet feels and heals with his words. You poetry surely makes a difference. Keep writing because its what makes you so special. !!
Thank you so much dear Vamsi…surely poetry has a healing effect
And its constant support of friends like you that feelings can be explained so beautifully and furthermore could be understand….the happiness to be understood itself is an exotic feeling…
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