beautiful pastime

dusk arising


slowly, oh so slowly,
as if stroking the warm night air
which clothes her nakedness
his fingertips,
barely touching
trace her soft curves
tell of the tenderness
full in his heart
for the gift of her love,

relaxed, content,
oiled, perfumed
gossamer caresses
trace unhurried journeys
of discovered pleasure
over tingling flesh
bringing shudders
sudden quiet gasps
whimpering
breaths held
released
uncontrolled panting
then thrashing
grasping his hand to stillness


the longed for look
of her eyes
a time of pleasure
and for no return
no lustful gratification goal in mind
other than to feel
her pleasure....
to please her
this way
pleasure itself
needing her to know him
for his delight
in simply worshipping
her beauty

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  • Goldfinch60

    Beautiful lovelorn words d a.

    Andy

    • dusk arising

      Oh yes plenty of love in the air in this piece.

    • Neville



      tis amazing, just gazing .. but when taken in and digested what a thrill .. truly brill ...................... tis indeedly goodly goodest good sir DA ......... N

      • dusk arising

        Thank you Neville, there were wonderful memories floating around as i wrote this.

      • spilleronsheet

        Love returns in air
        With hues of pink
        The paradise of lovers heard in between
        Good one dear Duskā€¦.

      • Michael Edwards

        Such a sensuous write - had me reaching for a beer and a fag - only kidding.

        • dusk arising

          LOL I strongly suspect this piece created many visuals for readers. A beer after reading would be highly recommended.

        • Paul Bell

          Aren't women great to look at, and be around. The pleasure of being naked together, is just the pleasure of being together.

          • dusk arising

            Most definitely, you'll notice the absence of the rolling pin. Thanks Paul.

            • Paul Bell

              That's for Saturday night's cabaret.

            • Bella Shepard

              The power and magic of touch. It can communicate in ways beyond words. You have captured that beautifully in this poem. Has me swooning.

              • dusk arising

                It's the thought which drives the touch which really wins through i think. Swoon awa LOL thank you Bella.

              • Jerry Reynolds

                Wow, dusk.
                Now that's a manly write
                Tap dancing on the line
                Between a moment poetic
                And coveting a life.

                • dusk arising

                  Thank you for such a poetic, creative comment here Jerry.

                • Rozina

                  Wow!

                  • dusk arising

                    Cor ! Thank you Rozina.

                  • dusk arising

                    Well if you could find me a few ladies upon whom to experiment, I'd like to try out your supposition LOL thank you Teddy.



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