if I were filled with helium and floated to the moon...
... would you come and save me?
build a rocket out of devotion and
fly through the shadows to be by my side...
what if I jumped out of a plane in the Sahara Desert...
... could you follow me?
sew a parachute out of pain and
wade through the storm of self-loathing to save me from myself...
if I fell off a cliff and into the sea...
... would you rescue me?
craft a boat out of lust and
row through the waves of doubt to be my one and only...
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kitty the naughty poet (
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What if...? the most asked and unanswered question of all.
Andy
It is Andy, thanks for commenting
I love this ! Nicely expressed , Katie 🙂
Thank you my lovely friend
What if? Two words we so often say,…. Followed by blah,blah,yada,yada,yada,whatever. But can anyone truly say “what if” followed by what it is that they think they’d say or do in whatever the situation? I think know one truly knows. I can so easily say I’d do this and I’d do that if if win the lottery.(one of my favs,when people say what they do if they won the lottery)but I don’t think we truly know and never find out until the situation presents itself. This is just my take on those two iconic words,..”What if.” Good write Katie😀🥂🌹🕊🌞
Lol you are right tho mate that's why I used all the metaphors keeps it interesting lol
Yes, yes, and yes - each verse! lol.
Aww orche u sweetheart
'sew a parachute out of pain'..
I bow to your superior, poetic talent
dear Poet
thank you!
Aww thanks mek appreciated mate
Yes. You truly ATE this up. These metaphors are beyond, and those solutions by the other is so clever to relate back to love and the hardships of being in a relationship. Great job!
Thanks for commenting I appreciate it
Great job!
Thank you
aah, a true romantic at heart. Well penned kitty. 😉
Thank you 😊
I really enjoyed reading your poem.
Thanks
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