Swing of LIFE !!

Vamsi Sudha

 

 

Life truly resembles a swing

Oscillating between the two ends

One end being, Fear and Worry

And the other end being Positivity in glory

 

Fear of future, the killer of success

The robber of happiness, crusher of hope, killer of courage

Times when the swing is stuck on this end of life

Let Opportunity of positivity usher it to the other end

 

Swings of life are ineluctable

But, let us be a doorkeeper of the mind

Allowing the entry of positive swings

And let breeze of motivation be its escort, as Life Springs!!

  • Author: Vamsi Sudha (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 18th, 2022 01:51
  • Comment from author about the poem: Life surely needs a positive Swing !!
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 24
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, spilleronsheet, Dahlia
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  • L. B. Mek

    'Oscillating between the two ends'

    'Swings of life are ineluctable
    But, let us be a doorkeeper of the mind
    Allowing the entry of positive swings'..
    thank you for sharing
    such life-affirmingly, distilled wisdom
    dear Poet
    (I read and learn)

    • Vamsi Sudha

      Thanks Dear Mek , for those inspiring comments. 🙂 Life is our best teacher !!

    • spilleronsheet

      A good analogy
      A great metaphor
      Life itself seems a tragedy, a comedy and what not
      And when I was loosing that positive vibe
      Universe gave the answer, with dear Vamsi penning the essentials
      Just like the swing edging between the two
      Fear that keeps me awake
      And the flickering positivity that lets me keep going
      Thanks a lot dear Vamsi

      • Vamsi Sudha

        Yes Spiller, times when all of us go through the bumpy road of life..
        Infuse positivity and then the Ride is a pleasure ride. All the very best and you are sure to rock the world...Take care

      • Dahlia

        Beautiful 🙂🌹

      • Rocky Lagou

        Truly well expressed via amazing metaphor. Life is a sort of back and forth between happiness and stress or worry. But all in all, we must focus on staying in the light.

        • Vamsi Sudha

          Very True Rocky !! Life Rocks us, but need to be balanced and take the Right Swings of Life 🙂

        • Rozina

          Very true. Great lines.

          • Vamsi Sudha

            Thanks a bunch Rozina !!

          • Goldfinch60

            In my world life is always positive VS.

            Andy

            • Vamsi Sudha

              No wonder you are GOLD ..👍😀

            • Kittykoala

              Absolutely wonderful, love the expression of the duality of life and the need to allow the more positive side to open up

              • Vamsi Sudha

                Thanks Dear Poet, for commenting 🙂

              • sorenbarrett

                A beautiful metaphor. Children like swings and keeping a childlike innocence and positivity is important. Well written.

                • Vamsi Sudha

                  Thanks a lot Soren !! Pleasure is mine 🙂



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