Upon the Drift of Wimbleball Lake

Neville

Upon the Drift of Wimbleball Lake

 

Looking much like some

misshapen shard of silver blue glass

on a warm summers day

and from a distance, with no visible

signs of a ripple or wave

to give her away, nor to hint at the

length or the depth of her ..

Up close tho’ she lures like a mistress

and acts a little depraved

Just the way that you want her to ..

Yet, here and there, where the blossom

drifts and banks of it pile high ..

That is where, we may once have made

love, neath a near cloudless sky ..

There on the drift of Wimbleball Lake

that jewel of a place, pinned

to the heart of our very own rural Exmoor ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 19th, 2022 02:29
  • Comment from author about the poem: a special place, not too far, as indeed I type these words, this very mane ...
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 61
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, Jerry Reynolds, spilleronsheet
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  • Caring dove

    a lovely writing ))

    • Neville



      and a seriously lovely and much appreciated viewing ... N 🙂

    • L. B. Mek


      just
      ahhhhhh
      like, just
      ahhhhhhhhhhhhh
      you know?!
      just
      ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
      how I cherish
      those innate, subtle brushstrokes
      in your bewitching, Poetry
      thank you, Hyung
      as-ever, I read
      and learn, gratefully!

      • Neville



        that's so very bloomin kind my friend ............ bless you .. N 🙂

      • dusk arising

        Memories lay like a mist upon the landscapes of our mind yet blow in the face with sudden reminisce when we confront such places in the flesh.

        Once again your poetry has a mystic haunted feel drawing your reader into the inevitable picturescape... a watercolours haze in my minds eye rests peacefully.

        • Neville



          your words laid above are like poetry and look n read divine to these great big ears & eyes of mine 🙂

        • Jerry Reynolds

          Well done, Neville.
          Sometimes nature and love collide and it all makes sense. You have captured it well.

          • Neville



            Cheers Jez .. very muchly appreciated my friend .. N

          • Rocky Lagou

            Wow, truly quite the touching tale Neville. I mean I totally felt the bittersweet sensations your poem gave me, with the wistful longing and the "could've been's." Sometimes not everything is destined, sadly. Hope you're doing good now though, you know with the whole love shebang.

            • Neville



              well just for the record, I can't thank you enough for checking in and the encouraging review .. but a gentleman neva tells, does one ................ N 🙂

            • Bella Shepard

              I love the "her that is the lake" which is reminiscent of the "her that you loved". Those moments are special and priceless. How lyrical and beautifully crafted.

              • Neville



                many thank you's my friend, I really could not ask for more ................... Neville

              • spilleronsheet

                A beautiful imagery
                I was lost in the scenery
                A calm serene place
                To take abode in the pains
                Truly enjoyed dear Neville

                • Neville



                  so nice of you to say so spills bless you my friend .... Neville

                • orchidee

                  Should I meet her? lol.

                  • Neville



                    thank you for visiting these words orchidee

                  • Rozina

                    So beautiful Neville.

                    • Neville



                      thank you Roz ...................................... Neville

                    • Goldfinch60

                      A very special place for you Neville and will always be special to you.

                      Andy

                      • Neville



                        Cheers for that & to you, my little golden wonder ......... Neville



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