Senryu #4

Laura🌻

Sleepiness absent

Where art thou when I need you

Bolo…sleepiness

  • Author: Laura🌻 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 22nd, 2022 00:33
  • Comment from author about the poem: The lack of sleep is the culprit for making me write.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 37
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
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  • Rozina

    Good one Laura.

    • Laura🌻

      Thank you for your much appreciated comment.

      Have a wonderful day.😎

      Laura🌻

    • Michael Edwards

      I'm a lover of short pieces as you know and this up at the top of the senryu tree.

      • Laura🌻

        Thank you dear Michael. As you can tell from my two Senryus, I’m dealing with not being able to sleep due to yesterday’s treatment. I’m not letting this burst of energy go to waste…so commands my Muse.
        Thank you for your awesome comment.
        Have a wonderful day.
        Love to beautiful Jeanne ❤️

        Laura🌻

      • dusk arising

        When the mind will not rest and sleepless hours torment... what better way to rest the mind than unloading into poetry... works for me.

        THough I wish you better nights sleeping, it is good to see you writing again 🌻

      • Rocky Lagou

        May be insomnia. Although I don't personally deal with it, it takes me a while before I actually fall asleep so I just stay with an active mind for like an hour or two before entering the subconscious state. During that period my muse tends to pull my ear and beckons me to write. Relatable.

      • Neville



        made me smile but its not funny when the arms of Morpheus elude ya is it ......... tell the muse you need more zzzz's 🙂

      • Paul Bell

        You need to be counting sheep.
        In saying that, I don't know why.

      • Accidental Poet

        I too sometimes have trouble sleeping. And when I don't sleep, I'm amazed at what comes by way of keyboard or pen. Hope you can get some sleep soon Laura. 😴



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