When hope eludes us
And life's struggle is upslope
Nothing seems brighter
Except the daylight
Time to relook into the Eye( I ) piece
Of Kaleidoscope of Life
A turn and a twist, the bits get arranged
For a new brighter possibility of life
Keep swiveling,
Not to lose your axis, focus on Life
And see how dramatic
The Bits of Life Kaleidoscope rearrange
To unknown dramatic events of LIFE !!!
- Author: Vamsi Sudha ( Offline)
- Published: April 22nd, 2022 00:47
- Comment from author about the poem: Every around us teaches HOPE of Life... We just need the EYE , to look at it with finesse....
- Category: Reflection
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Comments3
That light is always there for us VS.
Andy
Thanks Gold 🙂 you are our cheer leader..
'to look at it with finesse'..
indeed..
much like that finesse
in your poetry's, eloquence..
a beautifully
hope inducing, message
to champion..
thank you! dear poet
Thanks dear Mek !! Life turns the way we look at it...Let it be filled with hope..
As, Where thought goes..Energy goes....:)
I love the paranthetical "I" after the "Eye." I feel we're all trying to piece our own puzzles and mostly that can be an internal one we have to learn to manage. Great poem!
Yes Dear Rocky, The "I" has to be focused to get the bits right and colorful. You did get the inner meaning , which I wished to convey...
Thanks a lot for reading between the lines..
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