Bits of LIFE !!!

Vamsi Sudha

When hope eludes us

And life's struggle is upslope

Nothing seems brighter

Except the daylight

 

Time to relook into the Eye( I ) piece

Of Kaleidoscope of Life

A turn and a twist, the bits get arranged

For a new brighter possibility of life

 

Keep swiveling,

Not to lose your axis, focus on Life

And see how dramatic

The Bits of Life Kaleidoscope rearrange

To unknown dramatic events of LIFE !!!

  • Author: Vamsi Sudha (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 22nd, 2022 00:47
  • Comment from author about the poem: Every around us teaches HOPE of Life... We just need the EYE , to look at it with finesse....
  • Category: Reflection
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Comments3

  • Goldfinch60

    That light is always there for us VS.

    Andy

    • Vamsi Sudha

      Thanks Gold 🙂 you are our cheer leader..

    • L. B. Mek

      'to look at it with finesse'..
      indeed..
      much like that finesse
      in your poetry's, eloquence..
      a beautifully
      hope inducing, message
      to champion..
      thank you! dear poet

      • Vamsi Sudha

        Thanks dear Mek !! Life turns the way we look at it...Let it be filled with hope..
        As, Where thought goes..Energy goes....:)

      • Rocky Lagou

        I love the paranthetical "I" after the "Eye." I feel we're all trying to piece our own puzzles and mostly that can be an internal one we have to learn to manage. Great poem!

        • Vamsi Sudha

          Yes Dear Rocky, The "I" has to be focused to get the bits right and colorful. You did get the inner meaning , which I wished to convey...
          Thanks a lot for reading between the lines..



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