Deep Love Tanka.

Goldfinch60



 

 

Our love is so strong,

We don’t know how it happened.

It was very swift,

A love that has become deep,

So very deep between us.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 23rd, 2022 01:19
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 20
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold.
    It's now or never that I have to make some decisions, such as:
    To sing or not?
    To add water or not?
    To divorce KP or not? Would not make much difference if I did, cos I never see her in person 99% of the time - only on TV, in magazines, etc. lol.

    • Goldfinch60

      Sing away Orchi, I can't hear you from here.
      Do not put water anywhere near my scotch!!!!
      Surely there is enough of her added so that some of it could stay with you while she gallivants around doing her own thing.

      Andy

    • dusk arising

      You realise we're all going to want invites dont you?

      • Goldfinch60

        Of course, can you make it to the moon?

      • Michael Edwards

        Great stuff - all the best to the pair of you.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Michael, much appreciated.

          Andy

        • Distant View

          Love can take you unawares sometimes - hit you when you are not even looking for it!

          • Goldfinch60

            Certainly so very true in this case DV, thank you.

            Andy

          • Crowns4Christ

            Congratulations Andy,you found, peace, love and happiness again, I'm so very happy for you,

            • Goldfinch60

              Most kind Melissa, thank you.

              Andy

            • Rozina

              Beautiful love lines.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Rozina.

                Andy

              • Neville



                I sense deep joy inspired every word .... Neville

                • Goldfinch60

                  So true Neville, thank you.

                  Andy



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