Neville

Wind Dancer .. a Haiku


Notice of absence from Neville


I am taking some time out to try and help out a little bit in the Ukraine .. not sure how long I will be away, but will be back .. just you mark my words .. stay safe folks N :)

Wind Dancer .. a Haiku

 

high o’er those primrose banks

kites dance on thermals

without a care in the wild ..

Comments14

  • orchidee

    A fine write N.

    • Neville



      Thank you Orchidee ...................................... 🙂

    • Fay Slimm.

      To see on a clear day those dancing sky-surfers fills poetic hearts with words that writers like yourself bring easy to life - - a breath of fresh air Nev. to this reader's return. Thanking you muchly.

      • Neville



        how kind of you Fay .. thank you my friend and welcome home .................. N

      • Rozina

        A spring vision Neville? Nice.

        • Neville



          tis indeed .............................................. thank you Roz .. Neville

        • Accidental Poet

          A very lifting write today N. 😎

          • Neville



            High AP & thank you kindly my friend ............... 🙂

          • Draven

            Whimsical and nicely written. I love a good haiku.

            • Neville



              that means an awful lot to me my friend and I sincerely thank you for leaving those kind words behind ........... Neville

            • spilleronsheet

              A majestic scene cheering my heart inside…and all praises to capture in a haiku…its too difficult to compose one…wonderful dear Neville….

              • Neville



                your words here today are heart-warming dear spills & leave me feeling quite pleasantly light headed .. ..................... must be the altitude methinks 🙂 x

              • Christina8

                Very nicely written! Ah...those primrose banks......if only spring would spring up where I live!

                • Neville



                  I have a feeling it wont be that long now C .................... oh' n thank thee my lady for checking in today 🙂

                  • Christina8

                    No it won't be too long, its finally warming up.........C

                  • L. B. Mek

                    reminds me of one of keats', letters
                    only distilled and concentrated
                    to its true poetic, eloquent form..
                    'a tipsy Haiku, like those dancing
                    kites
                    lost, in those winds of life..'..
                    such an immersive read, thank you!
                    dear Poet supreme

                    • Neville



                      I am more than merely honoured, as is likewise my pen .................................... thank you brother M
                      N

                    • Rocky Lagou

                      "Without a care," ahh. What a blessing it is to be problem-free, no stress or worries, loving your imagery!

                      • Neville



                        thank you Rocky ............ your visits are invariably both welcome & appreciated .. Neville

                      • dusk arising

                        Take me away from this cruel and battering torment of modern life and float me high on natures chariot wind that i may know again elemental joy anf freedom.

                        Those simple things hold such meaningful reward.

                        • Neville



                          I wanna bang your drum sir ..................................... I do n truly .. N 🙂

                        • Teddy.15

                          I believe the last word could have also been world, what a charming poem of haiku dear Neville, beautifully composed. 💖

                          • Neville



                            you are absolutely write Teddy .. I toyed with the same idea myself, as indeed I also played with the word wind for a while too ....................................... thank you hawk-eye 💖x

                            • Teddy.15

                              But it works beautifully with wild and with Neville's twists that I adore. 💖

                            • MendedFences27

                              Dancing in the wind. Somewhere off a cliff I imagine. Free to be "wild." A scene you described poetically. Nice one. - Phil A.

                              • Neville



                                Free to be wild is such an appealing concept & so bloomin poetic .. Thank you MF27 more than just kindly and true .. I am sending my very best wishes and kind regards to You .......... Neville

                              • Goldfinch60

                                Kites are so wonderful to see, they fly over our croquet lawn quite regularly.

                                Andy

                                • Neville



                                  so good to hear as well as good to see, I see, and hear .. if you get my drift Andy ....... Neville

                                • Dove

                                  Beautiful imagery

                                  • Neville



                                    that'll do nicely .. very nicely indeed .................... thank you Dove, I sure hope you are gonna hang around some now .. x



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