Wind Dancer .. a Haiku
high o’er those primrose banks
kites dance on thermals
without a care in the wild ..
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Neville (
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A fine write N.
Thank you Orchidee ...................................... 🙂
To see on a clear day those dancing sky-surfers fills poetic hearts with words that writers like yourself bring easy to life - - a breath of fresh air Nev. to this reader's return. Thanking you muchly.
how kind of you Fay .. thank you my friend and welcome home .................. N
A spring vision Neville? Nice.
tis indeed .............................................. thank you Roz .. Neville
A very lifting write today N. 😎
High AP & thank you kindly my friend ............... 🙂
Whimsical and nicely written. I love a good haiku.
that means an awful lot to me my friend and I sincerely thank you for leaving those kind words behind ........... Neville
A majestic scene cheering my heart inside…and all praises to capture in a haiku…its too difficult to compose one…wonderful dear Neville….
your words here today are heart-warming dear spills & leave me feeling quite pleasantly light headed .. ..................... must be the altitude methinks 🙂 x
Very nicely written! Ah...those primrose banks......if only spring would spring up where I live!
I have a feeling it wont be that long now C .................... oh' n thank thee my lady for checking in today 🙂
No it won't be too long, its finally warming up.........C
reminds me of one of keats', letters
only distilled and concentrated
to its true poetic, eloquent form..
'a tipsy Haiku, like those dancing
kites
lost, in those winds of life..'..
such an immersive read, thank you!
dear Poet supreme
I am more than merely honoured, as is likewise my pen .................................... thank you brother M
N
"Without a care," ahh. What a blessing it is to be problem-free, no stress or worries, loving your imagery!
thank you Rocky ............ your visits are invariably both welcome & appreciated .. Neville
Take me away from this cruel and battering torment of modern life and float me high on natures chariot wind that i may know again elemental joy anf freedom.
Those simple things hold such meaningful reward.
I wanna bang your drum sir ..................................... I do n truly .. N 🙂
Dancing in the wind. Somewhere off a cliff I imagine. Free to be "wild." A scene you described poetically. Nice one. - Phil A.
Free to be wild is such an appealing concept & so bloomin poetic .. Thank you MF27 more than just kindly and true .. I am sending my very best wishes and kind regards to You .......... Neville
Kites are so wonderful to see, they fly over our croquet lawn quite regularly.
Andy
so good to hear as well as good to see, I see, and hear .. if you get my drift Andy ....... Neville
Beautiful imagery
that'll do nicely .. very nicely indeed .................... thank you Dove, I sure hope you are gonna hang around some now .. x
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