Yonder.
Over the borders of everyday dim
lies dreamy Yonder
of potent beyondness which
will cover divides.
Tho' above and apart distance
retreats with mundane
when hearts start igniting
in ache's duo-fires.
Bliss can be found in a trice if
kindled with fancy
where even a wish for a kiss
does not fade or die.
Launched into new bloom with
no more than allure
pleasures of Yonder can be
mesmeric if tried
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Fay Slimm. (
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Beautiful gentle words Fay )) I liked the read 🙂
Thank you dear friend - I had hope it would come over as gentle
As one who has dwelt in yonder for several years I confirm it outshines everyday dim by a very poetic long shot. It is a very comfortable place to reside though one does definitely need to be self supporting.
Mesmeric indeed, one becomes intoxicated with possibilities.
What an expressive comment and my grateful thanks dear Dusk.
'of potent beyondness which
will cover divides.'..
Amen!
(we must, entrust
our hope, to horizons - Yonder
twinkling like stars
that offer us a glimpse of better!)
such a great read, dear Fay
thank you!
My pleasure as always is to write enjoyable verses for readers like your dear self L.B. -- I do agree we really must look yonder and see more hope on the horizon
I cast not appreciation of this poem yonder, but draw it near, to say good write Fay!
And I thank you for your valued opinion dear Orchi.
No one in their write mind aint gonna love this ................. N x
So glad you're in your right mind then and that you love it too.............. x
Yes Fay! That "yonder" or that desire that's so tempting and alluring. It could be a dream or a person or a thing. We all want and we all want it asap. Thank you for this marvel.
Delighted you like the thought of looking to yonder or to beyondness where hope may be found - - Thanks Rocky for dropping by .
Beautiful words that bring to mind 'the Beyondness Of Things' by John Barry - they would work together so well in performance poetry.
Ah you must know ;how much I admire Barry and his lovely Beyondness of Things though I had not even heart it when this piece was first written -- but wow to think it could be read aloud as that wonderful music is played - -- well we can dream eh - -thanks a load Michael.
You make all your poems so effortless. Every one an absolute pleasure to read Fay
Ah - -- - your words make the writing so worth while dear Sax - so many thanks coming your way for your kind encouragement.
Yes mesmerising poetry! Thank you.
Dear Rozina - - many thanks for stopping by to read and review Yonder
The image melds beautifully with the poem. I can see your description of Yonder in it so vividly, a lovely place that is ever on the horizon, but seems to be just out of reach. For me, a place filled with longing and hope. Thank You!
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