Some things are Just Not Right

Neville

Some Things are Just Not Right

 

Some things

are just not right

like

left hand turns

thalidomide

puppy farms

and

napalm burns ..

No, some things

are just

not right at all ..

Like

swastikas

nazi salutes

Semtex

or genocide ..

Yes, indeed

some things are

just not

right like hunger

thirst

and whale culls

are just

not right ..

And like I said

before ..

Some things are

just not

bloody

right at all ..

Like

hypocrites

EU bureaucrats

poverty

bullying

and of course

Cancer

with a capitol C

in all of its

many forms

or torture ..

Oh’ and let’s not

forget

good old

Covid 19

Sunday trading

or WMD’s

and plagiarism ..

Oh’ yes

indeed

some things

are just

not right at all ..

Like nicotine

and cyanide

or LSD

laced margarine

corrupt MP’s

and plastic ..

No, some

things are just

not right ..

But then, they

must never be

forgot

and simply

cannot be

denied or ignored ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 26th, 2022 04:26
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  • Caring dove

    Their not right .. a good writing .. if only things were different and such things didn’t exist .

    • Neville



      in spite of my wishes, prayers and dreams, I can not imagine a world without things that are wrong .. .. thank you my friend for visiting again today .. Neville

    • Caring dove

      So confusing .. the things that happen in this world .. when they shouldn’t

      • Neville



        again, you are so right ..

      • Distant View

        No, some things are not right at all, but they are still with us. Danger lurks. Some dangers we can avoid, others, sometimes, we cannot.

        • Neville



          that's a whole lotta truth DV ........ and fits squarely on this page .. thank you my friend .. Neville

        • L. B. Mek

          an important write, dear Poet!
          this
          a listing of murderous
          intent
          and divisive, hate's
          sinister, roots..
          no
          we must never forget and pretend
          that they're all some nightmare
          form a past
          far removed
          from our daily reality..
          like
          how the world press, pretend
          Ukraine, is the only active war
          on our planet
          when in reality, its just the one
          that's most profitable
          to report about...!
          yes, we must never
          forget
          and deny those harsh realities
          of life..

          • Neville



            By jove, I think he's got it .................... Neville

          • Fay Slimm.

            That list is significantly versed as an implicit warning that so much recorded evil needs always to be in the front of our minds .. An explosive reminder that such actions and attitudes are no way to gain love and peace - - - thanks a load for this write my friend.

            • Neville



              Just had to get a few things off my chest .. nothing more but certainly, no less ... ta F .. N x

            • orchidee

              A fine write N.
              An extra line needed? 'Orchi's singing will never be right!' heehee.

              • Neville



                thank you for reminding me, I just added a couple of extra's .. I'll let you off this time Mr. O 🙂

              • dusk arising

                No, not right at all. The list could go on and on.
                I feel we must srtive for the positives whilst dealing with the negatives and heap praise upon the do gooders in life.
                It would be nice to think we learn from history's 'not rights' but sadly we see repetition taking place.

                • Neville



                  Yes absolutely .. things just go round and round & we never seem to learn ... thanks DA

                • Laura🌻

                  Dear Neville,

                  You’re so spot on with your thoughts that you’ve inked for your readers. Much to ponder upon…

                  Thank you for sharing.

                  Laura🌻

                  • Neville



                    and you my lovely are the little ray of sunshine these words and I both needed .... 🌻

                    • Laura🌻

                      ☀️🌻

                    • Rocky Lagou

                      I admire the way you sculpted this poem. It's like one long thin line of things that are "just not right." The morally and wickedly corrupt. The terrorists and the evil in the world. You summed it up wonderfully.

                      • Neville

                        Cheers
                        Rocky
                        At
                        Least
                        I feel
                        as though
                        my ink
                        has not
                        been wasted
                        ...
                        Neville

                      • Christina8

                        That was a fantastic write by you dear N.....I can't think of what isn't right most....probably when people just look the other way and live their lives like things aren't happening when they could do something about it, like child poverty, or anything to do with children for that matter! Good solid write!

                        • Neville



                          I just can't thank you enough C ..................... and believe me, I aint kidding ......... N x

                        • MR.apocalypse

                          the words of someone who wishes not just to gain wisdom but teach the wisdom they've learned

                          • Neville



                            I seriously like the cut of your jib sir .. not only a welcome visit MR.apocalypse but a much appreciated one too .. thank you n truly tooly .. Neville

                          • Michael Edwards

                            And can I add cancer - - and yet there is so much good in the world - another poem?

                            • Neville



                              You can indeed, and so it has been my friend .. in fact, I dont know how 'it' was not there in my first publication, it most certainly should have been and I have since now posted a more inclusive & comprehensive version ... Neville

                            • spilleronsheet

                              Totally resonating on those lines…something’s totally not right…from drugs, explosives, violence and war, corrupt bureaucracy to hypocrisy, opportunists to greedy politicians… so well said dear Neville…hope they extinguish faster…

                              • Neville



                                if I could fire the lot of em I most certainly would ... I might even go down in history as the great fire extinguisher ... 🙂 N x

                              • Rozina

                                You are SO RIGHT Neville. It got me thinking about many wrong things in life. A great thought provoking write.

                                • Neville



                                  that is so good to hear. thank you kindly Roz ... Neville



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