Dun a Runna
More fleeting than an April shower
he loved her less than half an hour
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Originally writ a very long time ago, when I was a very norty boy .. can ya guess why they called me Bullet : )
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Guess this is why - runnin' and not carin' where or whom he hit for that half hour he deserved the label Bullet. - -- a swift getaway makes that a wery norty boy methinks.......... x
Twas a very long time ago mind .............. x
Bullet? Maybe because you had six in the clip and one in the chamber.
Half an hour can see much crammed in. Life changing things happen in seconds. Discarding the replaceable is often done on the trot.
Opportunity taken is like the sweephand of life, catch it or... gone.
thanks for the thumbs up our DA .. I realised that life's too short to try and track em down and apologise proper .. and anyway, it would probably be too dangerous 🙂
You are absolutely bang on squire ................ cheers DA ....... N 🙂
I wouldn't know - Bullet? - swoon!
Shall I meet her now then, if you've dashed off?! lol.
I loves 'em and leaves 'em - well, I leaves KP anyway. lol.
Her number is cryptically incorporated in the details box above .. and begins with 01 🙂
lol
everything in life, needs
practise
to gain, endurance
when we learn that
we have a chance
at establishing relationships
that exist, in our blink-n-miss
reality..
than linger, longer
in our regret's, rear
view, warped-by-Time
reverie mirrors..
(btw Hyung
how's the book coming along?)
it seems you can read me like a book .. cheers Mek ... coming along nicely .. maybe three quarters in .......................................................... Neville 🙂
close then, will enquire again in Autumn
if me little noggin can remember, lol
This is really funny, Bullet! A naughty boy indeed!! This is a great little write!! C
they also called me Dead Eye Dick but since I always seemed to miss the mark and go flying off on one, I kinda preferred Bullet .. cheers C .. N 🙂
Speedy Gonzales!
................................................................................................................ Areeeeeebah areeeeebah 🙂
Back in the day eh Neville.
Andy
Way back may friend .................................. 🙂
Hehe! This actually made me laugh then made me think, "gosh, c'mon can't we just go at least one day without heartbreak?" I see you wrote this a while ago though, we're all immature during our younger years.
thanks for being so understanding Rocky .. N 🙂
Oh my , I hope his love making was memorable, lol
I have it on good authority it ... no I can't .. sorry, a gentleman neva does, does one .... N 🙂
Well god Dummit
He outdun me by 29 minnit
hold on a minute, she said ... no I can't he replied 28 mins and 57 secs is a new record she sighed 🙂
Well god Dummit
He outdun me by 29 minnit
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