Neville

Dun a Runna

Dun a Runna

 

More fleeting than an April shower

he loved her less than half an hour

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 5th, 2022 03:16
  • Comment from author about the poem: Originally writ a very long time ago, when I was a very norty boy .. can ya guess why they called me Bullet : )
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  • Fay Slimm.

    Guess this is why - runnin' and not carin' where or whom he hit for that half hour he deserved the label Bullet. - -- a swift getaway makes that a wery norty boy methinks.......... x

    • Neville



      Twas a very long time ago mind .............. x

    • dusk arising

      Bullet? Maybe because you had six in the clip and one in the chamber.

      Half an hour can see much crammed in. Life changing things happen in seconds. Discarding the replaceable is often done on the trot.

      Opportunity taken is like the sweephand of life, catch it or... gone.

      • Neville



        thanks for the thumbs up our DA .. I realised that life's too short to try and track em down and apologise proper .. and anyway, it would probably be too dangerous 🙂

        • Neville



          You are absolutely bang on squire ................ cheers DA ....... N 🙂

        • Teddy.15

          lol so much humour in here dear Neville, as fast as lightning ⚡ 💖

          • Neville



            like I said Teddy, I was once a very naughty boy .. but now though, I'm just naughty 🙂

          • orchidee

            I wouldn't know - Bullet? - swoon!
            Shall I meet her now then, if you've dashed off?! lol.
            I loves 'em and leaves 'em - well, I leaves KP anyway. lol.

            • Neville



              Her number is cryptically incorporated in the details box above .. and begins with 01 🙂

            • L. B. Mek

              lol
              everything in life, needs
              practise
              to gain, endurance
              when we learn that
              we have a chance
              at establishing relationships
              that exist, in our blink-n-miss
              reality..
              than linger, longer
              in our regret's, rear
              view, warped-by-Time
              reverie mirrors..
              (btw Hyung
              how's the book coming along?)

              • Neville



                it seems you can read me like a book .. cheers Mek ... coming along nicely .. maybe three quarters in .......................................................... Neville 🙂

                • L. B. Mek

                  close then, will enquire again in Autumn
                  if me little noggin can remember, lol

                • Christina8

                  This is really funny, Bullet! A naughty boy indeed!! This is a great little write!! C

                  • Neville



                    they also called me Dead Eye Dick but since I always seemed to miss the mark and go flying off on one, I kinda preferred Bullet .. cheers C .. N 🙂

                  • Rozina

                    Speedy Gonzales!

                    • Neville


                      ................................................................................................................ Areeeeeebah areeeeebah 🙂

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Back in the day eh Neville.

                      Andy

                      • Neville



                        Way back may friend .................................. 🙂

                      • Rocky Lagou

                        Hehe! This actually made me laugh then made me think, "gosh, c'mon can't we just go at least one day without heartbreak?" I see you wrote this a while ago though, we're all immature during our younger years.

                        • Neville


                          thanks for being so understanding Rocky .. N 🙂

                        • Dove

                          Oh my , I hope his love making was memorable, lol

                          • Neville



                            I have it on good authority it ... no I can't .. sorry, a gentleman neva does, does one .... N 🙂

                          • SureshG

                            Well god Dummit
                            He outdun me by 29 minnit

                            • Neville



                              hold on a minute, she said ... no I can't he replied 28 mins and 57 secs is a new record she sighed 🙂

                            • SureshG

                              Well god Dummit
                              He outdun me by 29 minnit



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