Searching the silver line

spilleronsheet

A day shall arrive,

When destiny shall be reached

A day when sun shall shine warmly upon

 

Alas,

Will existence be there to greet that heavenly morning

Where freedom shall meet the dreams ?

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  • Caring dove

    A nice writing , spiller ))

  • Goldfinch60

    Very intriguing question spilleronsheet.

    Andy

    • spilleronsheet

      Indeed dear Andy
      That question dwelling in mind
      Only hope that it shall greet the heavenly morning….

    • Vamsi Sudha

      Yes it will be there., and you would be there to pen it beautifully..~ Good one spiller....

      • spilleronsheet

        Thanks dear Vamsi….me to pen and you to read…that shall be wonderful

      • orchidee

        Good write S.
        I should think existence will be there to greet that heavenly morning.
        I don't think that morning will come to just 'nothingness' or annihilation, or as if one visits a friend but finds no one home.

        • spilleronsheet

          So very true dear Orchi….I truly hope we shall unite with our closed ones…and nothingness and emptiness shall not greet us…well said Orchi….

        • Nicholas Browning

          The fulfillment of a daydream, or the reward of life that's promised upon death. Will sentience accompany that existence? A very formidable question. May you find your answer.

          • spilleronsheet

            Thank you so much dear Nicholas…I truly hope, I am able to get my answers….

          • Bella Shepard

            A question to ponder, but never find the answer to. You cause us to pause and reflect, I thank you for that.

            • spilleronsheet

              Thanks dear Bella…maybe the answer is a quest, one to be never found of….

            • SureshG

              If not now, then maybe in the next, or the one after that, a sun shall shine upon all of us. Uplifting poem indeed

              • spilleronsheet

                Thanks dear Suresh…,truly sun shall shine upon us all….

              • Rozina

                I believe so in answer to your positive start.

                • spilleronsheet

                  Thanks dear Rozina….yep with positivity the battle begins….



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