A summers romance.
Casting away the chains
of responsibility into
this chanced breakaway,
a holiday by the seaside.
Carefree beach walks
beside an ocean
which played our love song
kissing our toes
with ebbing lust.
And caves of surrender
where, passion aroused,
cool air and sweat
of tight togetherness
released cemented bliss.
Times of happiness
afloat through days of
the eagerness of being.
Feeling more alive than ever.
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dusk arising (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A pastiche of memories.
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Comments5
Wow this feels so alive. I can sense the passion and intensity you wrote this with. "Feeling more alive than ever." A truly riveting experience.
Yeah, that's what love does to you isn't it - you're more alive than ever.
Wonderful loving words d a, I do hope they come your way.
Andy
Cor! That'd be nice... but I ain't building up my hopes.
Lovely words dusk ))
Describing lovely times too, thank you Charlotte.
Beautiful beach scene of lovers together.
Yes, would be special even in a thunder storm LOL.
been there, done that and enjoyed immensely ............ swimmingly good say's I sir ....................... Neville
All a part of life's rich tapestry as they say. And such vibrant colours.
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