kissing our toes with ebbing lust

dusk arising

 

 

 

A summers romance.
Casting away the chains
of responsibility into
this chanced breakaway,
a holiday by the seaside.


Carefree beach walks
beside an ocean
which played our love song
kissing our toes
with ebbing lust.


And caves of surrender
where, passion aroused,
cool air and sweat
of tight togetherness
released cemented bliss.

 

Times of happiness
afloat through days of
the eagerness of being.
Feeling more alive than ever.

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 11th, 2022 08:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: A pastiche of memories.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 28
  • User favorite of this poem: Rocky Lagou.
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Comments5

  • Rocky Lagou

    Wow this feels so alive. I can sense the passion and intensity you wrote this with. "Feeling more alive than ever." A truly riveting experience.

    • dusk arising

      Yeah, that's what love does to you isn't it - you're more alive than ever.

    • Goldfinch60

      Wonderful loving words d a, I do hope they come your way.

      Andy

      • dusk arising

        Cor! That'd be nice... but I ain't building up my hopes.

      • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

        Lovely words dusk ))

        • dusk arising

          Describing lovely times too, thank you Charlotte.

        • Rozina

          Beautiful beach scene of lovers together.

          • dusk arising

            Yes, would be special even in a thunder storm LOL.

          • Neville


            been there, done that and enjoyed immensely ............ swimmingly good say's I sir ....................... Neville

            • dusk arising

              All a part of life's rich tapestry as they say. And such vibrant colours.



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