Haiku #1

Christina8

It's between the sheets

The exciting game of sex

Horizontal love

  • Author: Christina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 13th, 2022 09:18
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is like my 2nd or 3rd attempt at a haiku ever....so maybe it's "eh". Please be kind! LOL
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 29
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  • Rocky Lagou

    "Horizontal love" Actually amazing, hehe. I wasn't expecting this steamy haiku but it was quite a fun surprise. You're doing splendidly Christina! Keep on producing these wonderful poems!

    • Christina8

      Thank you Rocky for your support, I really appreciate it!!!

    • dusk arising

      What a wonderful subject to choose for a haiku Christina.
      The only trouble with a haiku is that it's all over too quick... which for sex isn't too good LOL.

      • Christina8

        When you are right, you are right! Thanks so much for your wonderful response!

      • orchidee

        I apologise I've not considered the style of this Haiku much, on account that I've fainted. I would! lol.
        Aww - Fido says 'Never mind the theme; is it exactly 5/7/5?' He never lets me have any 'excitement'. I will have to put him out the back garden a while. What he don't see, won't hurt him. 'Out now, Fido!' lol.

        • Christina8

          You are so silly, thank you for the kind response!!

        • orchidee

          Fido says 'Is someone sneezing here?' Ai-koo?!
          Do shut up Orchi. lol.

          • Christina8

            LOL

            • orchidee

              It's nutty - or me being eccentric. lol.

            • Saxon Crow

              Shouldn't that be a hardku? Haha

              Brilliant poem Christina.

              • Christina8

                LOL thank you very much for your amusing reply, SC!

              • Bella Shepard

                My husband calls it the horizontal mambo, among other things. I have to say that your wonderful verse gives it the style and grace it so richly deserves.


                • Christina8

                  Thank you so much for your very kind reply to my poem. I appreciate it!!

                • tallisman

                  Clever and slightly daring! Loved it

                  !

                  • Christina8

                    Thank you tallisman, much appreciated!

                  • Rozina

                    A clever 5/7/5 indeed!

                    • Christina8

                      Thank you Rozina, I do appreciate it!!

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Good 5-7-5 Christina but as dusk said it is over too quick unlike sex.

                      Andy

                      • Christina8

                        Right? I know but a lot of folks are writing Haiku's, I thought I should give it a whirl. Thanks so much!

                      • Neville


                        I gotta hand it to you C ... this is an amazing bit o penmanship ...... N

                        • Christina8

                          Thank you very much dear N.....Much appreciated!! C

                        • Neville



                          so good I had to cum back for more .... 🙂

                        • Teddy.15

                          A hot haiku, excellent 😆

                          • Christina8

                            Thank you so much, Teddy!



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