The birds greet my dawn,
Its early light shines on me
As I hear nature.
The new day is here,
My love for her gets stronger
Each day I arise.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 17th, 2022 01:10
- Comment from author about the poem: Haiku are about nature, Senryu are about emotion. The video is for Teddy after reading her poem "I Miss You So Much"
- Category: Haiku
- Views: 32
- Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, Rocky Lagou, spilleronsheet, DestinysPerspectives, Vamsi Sudha
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Comments11
Good writes Gold.
Thank you Orchi.
Fido thinks a Haiku is someone sneezing - Hai-koo! Do shut up Orchi. lol.
splendid .. and not easy to pull off neither ................................ Neville
Thank you Neville, much appreciated.
Andy
Show off! Haha. Nicely penned GF
Who? Me?.
Thank you SC.
Andy
Brilliant!
thank you, dear Poet
Thank you Mek, much appreciated.
Andy
Beautiful, Andy. Quite a nice read!!
Thank you Christina, most kind.
Andy
What a beautiful display Andy. The way the haiku so seamlessly transitioned into the senryu was stunning. Wonderful job!
Thank you Rocky, I have been writing haiku and senryu for a few years now.
Andy
Brilliant Haiku and Senryu. Perfectly executed. Love your Senryu. It applies to so many situations of life. I think we all have said your words in our minds more than once. Loved them both - Phil A.
So kind Phil, thank you very much.
Andy
So good to read and to listen to the music this morning.
So glad that you enjoyed it Rozina, thank you.
Andy
Amazing dear poet
You managed to weave the gems and pearls together
So kind spilleronsheet, thank you.
Andy
Perfection!
So kind DP, thank you.
Andy
Wonderful Gold !! A new combination Haiku to Senryu !! Good one
Thank you VS, much appreciated.
Andy
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