Haiku To Senryu.

Goldfinch60



The birds greet my dawn,

Its early light shines on me

As I hear nature.

 

The new day is here,

My love for her gets stronger

Each day I arise.

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  • orchidee

    Good writes Gold.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Orchi.

      • orchidee

        Fido thinks a Haiku is someone sneezing - Hai-koo! Do shut up Orchi. lol.

      • Neville



        splendid .. and not easy to pull off neither ................................ Neville

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Neville, much appreciated.

          Andy

        • Saxon Crow

          Show off! Haha. Nicely penned GF

          • Goldfinch60

            Who? Me?.

            Thank you SC.

            Andy

          • L. B. Mek

            Brilliant!
            thank you, dear Poet

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Mek, much appreciated.

              Andy

            • Christina8

              Beautiful, Andy. Quite a nice read!!

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Christina, most kind.

                Andy

              • Rocky Lagou

                What a beautiful display Andy. The way the haiku so seamlessly transitioned into the senryu was stunning. Wonderful job!

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Rocky, I have been writing haiku and senryu for a few years now.

                  Andy

                • MendedFences27

                  Brilliant Haiku and Senryu. Perfectly executed. Love your Senryu. It applies to so many situations of life. I think we all have said your words in our minds more than once. Loved them both - Phil A.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    So kind Phil, thank you very much.

                    Andy

                  • Rozina

                    So good to read and to listen to the music this morning.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      So glad that you enjoyed it Rozina, thank you.

                      Andy

                    • spilleronsheet

                      Amazing dear poet
                      You managed to weave the gems and pearls together

                      • Goldfinch60

                        So kind spilleronsheet, thank you.

                        Andy

                      • DestinysPerspectives

                        Perfection!

                        • Goldfinch60

                          So kind DP, thank you.

                          Andy

                        • Vamsi Sudha

                          Wonderful Gold !! A new combination Haiku to Senryu !! Good one

                          • Goldfinch60

                            Thank you VS, much appreciated.

                            Andy



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