Sleeping eyes
dreary and tired
close in winks
telling lullabies of dreams
round blue
soar with oceans high
smoothing the visions
telling stories of all kinds
in her pair of eyes
lies world ticking by
where she covers, expanse of world inside
unknown to the mayhem
the chaos that plagues
she weaves fantasies
with pretty round eyes
Sleepy yet awaken eyes
writing poetries of all kinds
covets the pearls, she hide
while she paints, rainbow in lives
in her pair of eyes
lost is the beloved
Wondering;
what story will they ride ?
- Author: spilleronsheet ( Offline)
- Published: May 18th, 2022 01:57
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 45
Comments7
Lovely. No other word to describe it.
Thanks dear Saxon
Wow, I was adoring this artistical awakening with the line "Sleepy yet awaken eyes / writing poetries of all kinds" and then we reach then end and I was like: "Oh, c'mon!" Hehe, no but seriously this is wonderful, I sense this wistful sensation, a type of yearning. Magnificent.
I guess, I didn’t bore my readers…I could have stretched a bit long…I am glad you liked it…next time for sure, will write more…it’s always so good to get reviews from you…
A beautiful write dear poet. The wonderful phrasing of each stanza builds to an exquisite culmination. Loved it.
Thanks a lot dear Bella…glad you liked it…
a very gentle love song & quietly beautiful ...
Thanks dear Neville…that’s nice you found a love song in those sleeping eyes…
Very lovely lines to read and savour.
Thanks dear Rozina…
Wonderful words spilleronsheet.
Andy
Thanks dear Andy. Much appreciated.
Dear Spiller,
You are an enigma. I just feel like floating on a wave, reading your poetries. You traverse at the event so beautifully, it just presents itself before my eyes.
No wonder it was said " Poetry speaks" and your poetry speaks volumes. Thanks for a wonderful one again.
All the very best for your exams. On a lighter note pls don't write poetries in your exam :))
Thanks dear Vamsi…I ended up writing one, out of anxiety and let those words wandering around my mind, I ended up penning those emotions but yes i agree with your advice…love for poetry can take halt for a while…
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