Seasoned.
Such wakening this
when song seeps through windows
and dawn clothes hedgerows in
daisying glory
for Spring explodes banquets
of luscious greens
while sunlight races to
split open more.
Such wakening this
to seasoned renewal.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Good write Fay.
Erm, my poem goes: 'Such wakening this, Around midnight, By flashes of lightning'. True for one night last week.
Yes lightning can wake and keep us uneasy - - an unusual time ot the year for flashes like that to appear - - - good to know it was only for oe night Orchi.
Just by reading this poem, I felt refreshed by the lines
for Spring explodes banquets
of luscious greens
Beautiful piece of work!
Ah - thank you sincerely Judy for commenting on Seasoned - so pleased you enjoyed the read.
How lovely to see this through the window on waking up in the morning. I wish I could. I'll read it again in the morning and imagine the scene.....
Your comment on Seasoned means so much Rozina - thanking you muchly and if reading the verse wakens your need to imagine that's most pleasing to me..
Spring is well n truly sprung .. your words here are truly uplifting Fay .. thank you and kindly after a very long day ...................... Neville x
Tis me to thank thee mon ami for taking time to comment on my little scribbles after such a long journey home - hoping by now you are somewhat rested............x
Wonderful words Fay showing Nature in all its glory.
Andy
Thank you Andy - and yes I do agree Nature is full of true glory when we take the time to look.
Spring is a joyous season! Visual delights, coupled with a sense of optimism! We all need optimism - especially in the worrying world of 2022! A highly enjoyable read, Fay!
Thank you D.V. for your visit and comment on Seasoned and so glad you you enjoyed the read.
'Nature's aesthetic, seasonings
in our ever-so, visceral Lives...'
Brilliant! dear Fay
as-ever
Yes we really do need the changes of seasons to brighten our lives in this neck of the woods - thanks a load Mek for your constant support of my little writings.
Wow Fay, what a marvelous view. I wish for the day in which I can find that peace with nature, and just unwind all my tribulations onto a trellis window.
Yes it would be great to unload in front of a window just as Spring puts on her show of new growth my friend - well we can dream eh - thanks a load for your visit and comment.
Eee by 'eck luv.. Tha's gorrit in but a few lines. Glory be!
Fay, you are like the springtime itself in poetic form. I knew something was missing and then i read this. You have a magic which captures the essence of the thing.
Oh what a wonderful image you paint of my poetic efforts dear Dusky - -- thank you masses for believing I capture magic of essence sometimes - -- bless ee for sayin so too.
Oh, the season brings, bird songs and flowerings. Oh, I must be poeticizing. What a lovely capture of a fresh Spring day as seen through a window. "while sunlight races to split open more" is a great phrase. Your "wakening" has made my day. Loved it.- Phil A.
Delighted that the read gave you such pleasure dear Phil. The differing seasons are a reason for many a poem by writers like me.. Grateful thanks for dropping by.
Beautiful poem , Fay 🙂soft gentle lovely words .. liked reading this . Spring can be so nice . It was raining a lot here yesterday and thundering at times .. never like it
Hi dear Violet - - so good to know you enjoyed my short version of Spring - - - I am trying a new style of metre and am pleased it seems to have pleased readers. Thank you for your visit and comment.
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