Seasoned.

Fay Slimm.

 

Seasoned.

 

Such wakening this

when song seeps through windows

and dawn clothes hedgerows in

daisying glory

for Spring explodes banquets

of luscious greens

while sunlight races to

split open more.

 

Such wakening this

to seasoned renewal.

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  • orchidee

    Good write Fay.
    Erm, my poem goes: 'Such wakening this, Around midnight, By flashes of lightning'. True for one night last week.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Yes lightning can wake and keep us uneasy - - an unusual time ot the year for flashes like that to appear - - - good to know it was only for oe night Orchi.

    • JudyStella

      Just by reading this poem, I felt refreshed by the lines
      for Spring explodes banquets

      of luscious greens
      Beautiful piece of work!

      • Fay Slimm.

        Ah - thank you sincerely Judy for commenting on Seasoned - so pleased you enjoyed the read.

      • Rozina

        How lovely to see this through the window on waking up in the morning. I wish I could. I'll read it again in the morning and imagine the scene.....

        • Fay Slimm.

          Your comment on Seasoned means so much Rozina - thanking you muchly and if reading the verse wakens your need to imagine that's most pleasing to me..

        • Neville


          Spring is well n truly sprung .. your words here are truly uplifting Fay .. thank you and kindly after a very long day ...................... Neville x

          • Fay Slimm.

            Tis me to thank thee mon ami for taking time to comment on my little scribbles after such a long journey home - hoping by now you are somewhat rested............x

          • Goldfinch60

            Wonderful words Fay showing Nature in all its glory.

            Andy

            • Fay Slimm.

              Thank you Andy - and yes I do agree Nature is full of true glory when we take the time to look.

            • Distant View

              Spring is a joyous season! Visual delights, coupled with a sense of optimism! We all need optimism - especially in the worrying world of 2022! A highly enjoyable read, Fay!

              • Fay Slimm.

                Thank you D.V. for your visit and comment on Seasoned and so glad you you enjoyed the read.

              • L. B. Mek

                'Nature's aesthetic, seasonings
                in our ever-so, visceral Lives...'
                Brilliant! dear Fay
                as-ever

                • Fay Slimm.

                  Yes we really do need the changes of seasons to brighten our lives in this neck of the woods - thanks a load Mek for your constant support of my little writings.

                • Rocky Lagou

                  Wow Fay, what a marvelous view. I wish for the day in which I can find that peace with nature, and just unwind all my tribulations onto a trellis window.

                  • Fay Slimm.

                    Yes it would be great to unload in front of a window just as Spring puts on her show of new growth my friend - well we can dream eh - thanks a load for your visit and comment.

                  • dusk arising

                    Eee by 'eck luv.. Tha's gorrit in but a few lines. Glory be!

                    Fay, you are like the springtime itself in poetic form. I knew something was missing and then i read this. You have a magic which captures the essence of the thing.

                    • Fay Slimm.

                      Oh what a wonderful image you paint of my poetic efforts dear Dusky - -- thank you masses for believing I capture magic of essence sometimes - -- bless ee for sayin so too.

                    • MendedFences27

                      Oh, the season brings, bird songs and flowerings. Oh, I must be poeticizing. What a lovely capture of a fresh Spring day as seen through a window. "while sunlight races to split open more" is a great phrase. Your "wakening" has made my day. Loved it.- Phil A.

                      • Fay Slimm.

                        Delighted that the read gave you such pleasure dear Phil. The differing seasons are a reason for many a poem by writers like me.. Grateful thanks for dropping by.

                      • Caring dove

                        Beautiful poem , Fay 🙂soft gentle lovely words .. liked reading this . Spring can be so nice . It was raining a lot here yesterday and thundering at times .. never like it

                        • Fay Slimm.

                          Hi dear Violet - - so good to know you enjoyed my short version of Spring - - - I am trying a new style of metre and am pleased it seems to have pleased readers. Thank you for your visit and comment.



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