Reed Song
When I next feel inclined, I shall lean toward thee ..
Like a reed in the wind,
though bruised and bent double, still perfect and free ..
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Author:
Neville (
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A reed in the wind is just the way it’s meant to be .. tho it’s not perfect .
A good writing ))
Happy Saturday and many thanks, my friend ... Neville
When I get the urge, bullrushes I call them, i begin perfect and fee just as you describe but alas fall to being bruised and bent double... we are talking about gardening aren't we?
how could ya stoop so low ...................................................................... Neville 🙂
Good write N.
But only you and I are perfect! lol.
thank you Mr. O 🙂
A pefect shortie - love it.
Thank you Michael & BIGLY ...................... Neville
Soulful and needy is this poemed appeal and so winsomely scripted I can feel thee leaning................x
soulful always does it for me .. and my how I just love the word winsomely .................. x
Well, that's a unique comparison. I guess the "wind" can do a lot of damage, but it cannot take your freedom. A short but deep poem. - Phil A.
thank you Phil ..
Such fine words Neville.
Andy
Bless you kind sir .. Neville
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