I have many poems that live within me, from the seeds of darkness I let some breath
Never really sure if they'll bloom with my spirit or be another rambling that brings my soul back to the living
Time has brought change and the end of some blame, I'm now the only one that's digging my own grave
A need to slow down and stop shovelling so fast, to leave wounding habits back in the past with hopes of a future covered in laughs
I don't know where I'm going but like many before, I definitely know where I've been.
Now I drift in these thoughts knowing a new adventure can begin, to keep sailing these waters in a vessel that can't sink
Transcending back into the sun, wind and rain. Dancing in the moonlight of the twilight haze, hours and minutes all fade away.
You'll find me everywhere between the smoke and blaze, lost from each moment I'd never of have any other way
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: First writing in awhile but soooo good to read a few of your magnificent spectacular well need words, this was going to have a video but ran out of time. I'll have to do it to a more joyful rhyme! Thanks for keeping the shine my friends... all the best
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Good write Dan.
Good to see you my friend and always appreciated thank you!
You breathing?! I gave up breathing for 24 hours one day. I didn't feel good afterwards. lol. Well, I was trying to save on air. lol.
Hi Dan .. thanks for the message earlier . Nice to see you post another poem )! I like your use of nature in this 🙂
Nature is here for us all and thank you, always so kind.
Way to go Dan. You time away from us has seen your acceptance maturing. What will be, will be and you will walk through it hopefully knowing that the past has made you stronger, more resilient, and now with head held high (not too fukkin high mind u) you will look the future in the eye and grasp from it what is yours.
Rock-on!
Lmao.... the little seed I never noticed until I read your words again! Yes! What will be will be, I'm try to to hard and that's always been me or so I told myself, never ask for help! I'm all I need
I'll never lose the strength in my words even if my body can't keep up! I'll rock on and on because of spirits like yours!
Young at heart, forever in beat you my friend are truly one of a kind company!
smooth sailing, is a mirage
I've yet to encounter
stubbed toes and flash rains
marking our tracks
is a reality I'm much more used, to
so yeah
sht happens
world is Fcks
and people in it, are too broken
to begin contemplating, a solution
but
this I promise you, wise Poet
when we are true to ourselves
and choose empathy's kindness
and wisdom's humbleness
our day to day, becomes
so much easier to traverse
and within Poesy, we're afforded
the clearest reflection of ourselves
so we ink
to free our crimson pulses, ink
of all those wersisome worries
and thouts
and on
one scribbled truth
and glimpsed, wisdom
at a time
we pave a path, for veracity
to ease our burdens in life..
(stay Strong! brother
and remember
to enjoy the ride, this rollercoaster
existence, has us investing
our tomorrow's
before, we've taken stock
of our yesterday's
to insure
we continue to waste, our today's..)
Boom.... just like dusk you planted such beautiful seeds in your words to me and although I absorb them I didn't truly understand until now...
After clearing my thoughts I've come back to yours and see what I didn't know, the taking stock of the old left no room for the moment and to blessed with all of lifes interactions!
Thank you my friend for your being you!
Do, let them breathe, Dan. At least for a window of time, a seasonal clime.
Loved the little rhyme brought a gentle smile!
Always appreciated
Cheers Dan, you da man!
Such a relatable poem Dan that it made my heart sing.
Thank you my friend as my last read of your own still plays in my head!
Definitely helping keeping my heart pumping!
Great to see you back Dan and back with such a positive outlook, that is great.
Andy
Even better to see you my good friend and it comes and goes as I feel do I, nowhere near as much energy or time!
Always find it in the end, take care buddy
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