I let some breath

Poetic Dan

I have many poems that live within me, from the seeds of darkness I let some breath 


Never really sure if they'll bloom with my spirit or be another rambling that brings my soul back to the living


Time has brought change and the end of some blame, I'm now the only one that's digging my own grave 


A need to slow down and stop shovelling so fast, to leave wounding habits back in the past with hopes of a future covered in laughs


I don't know where I'm going but like many before, I definitely know where I've been. 


Now I drift in these thoughts knowing a new adventure can begin, to keep sailing these waters in a vessel that can't sink


Transcending back into the sun, wind and rain. Dancing in the moonlight of the twilight haze, hours and minutes all fade away.


You'll find me everywhere between the smoke and blaze, lost from each moment I'd never of have any other way





  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 23rd, 2022 02:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: First writing in awhile but soooo good to read a few of your magnificent spectacular well need words, this was going to have a video but ran out of time. I'll have to do it to a more joyful rhyme! Thanks for keeping the shine my friends... all the best
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  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, Saxon Crow.


  • orchidee

    Good write Dan.

    • Poetic Dan

      Good to see you my friend and always appreciated thank you!

      • orchidee

        You breathing?! I gave up breathing for 24 hours one day. I didn't feel good afterwards. lol. Well, I was trying to save on air. lol.

      • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

        Hi Dan .. thanks for the message earlier . Nice to see you post another poem )! I like your use of nature in this 🙂

        • Poetic Dan

          Nature is here for us all and thank you, always so kind.

        • dusk arising

          Way to go Dan. You time away from us has seen your acceptance maturing. What will be, will be and you will walk through it hopefully knowing that the past has made you stronger, more resilient, and now with head held high (not too fukkin high mind u) you will look the future in the eye and grasp from it what is yours.

          • Poetic Dan

            Lmao.... the little seed I never noticed until I read your words again! Yes! What will be will be, I'm try to to hard and that's always been me or so I told myself, never ask for help! I'm all I need
            I'll never lose the strength in my words even if my body can't keep up! I'll rock on and on because of spirits like yours!

            Young at heart, forever in beat you my friend are truly one of a kind company!

          • L. B. Mek

            smooth sailing, is a mirage
            I've yet to encounter
            stubbed toes and flash rains
            marking our tracks
            is a reality I'm much more used, to
            so yeah
            sht happens
            world is Fcks
            and people in it, are too broken
            to begin contemplating, a solution
            this I promise you, wise Poet
            when we are true to ourselves
            and choose empathy's kindness
            and wisdom's humbleness
            our day to day, becomes
            so much easier to traverse
            and within Poesy, we're afforded
            the clearest reflection of ourselves
            so we ink
            to free our crimson pulses, ink
            of all those wersisome worries
            and thouts
            and on
            one scribbled truth
            and glimpsed, wisdom
            at a time
            we pave a path, for veracity
            to ease our burdens in life..
            (stay Strong! brother
            and remember
            to enjoy the ride, this rollercoaster
            existence, has us investing
            our tomorrow's
            before, we've taken stock
            of our yesterday's
            to insure
            we continue to waste, our today's..)

            • Poetic Dan

              Boom.... just like dusk you planted such beautiful seeds in your words to me and although I absorb them I didn't truly understand until now...

              After clearing my thoughts I've come back to yours and see what I didn't know, the taking stock of the old left no room for the moment and to blessed with all of lifes interactions!

              Thank you my friend for your being you!

            • crypticbard

              Do, let them breathe, Dan. At least for a window of time, a seasonal clime.

              • Poetic Dan

                Loved the little rhyme brought a gentle smile!
                Always appreciated

                • crypticbard

                  Cheers Dan, you da man!

                • Saxon Crow

                  Such a relatable poem Dan that it made my heart sing.

                  • Poetic Dan

                    Thank you my friend as my last read of your own still plays in my head!
                    Definitely helping keeping my heart pumping!

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Great to see you back Dan and back with such a positive outlook, that is great.


                    • Poetic Dan

                      Even better to see you my good friend and it comes and goes as I feel do I, nowhere near as much energy or time!

                      Always find it in the end, take care buddy

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