Michael Edwards

FIVE SEVEN FIVES (2) - 1

 

 

 

A susurration

Ribbons of lingering day

lonely sighing nights.

Comments5

  • orchidee

    Good write and pic M.
    Miss Berles know that susurr-wotsit word?!

    • Michael Edwards

      She's not got a clue but she does have hips.

    • orchidee

      Good write and pic M.
      Miss Berles know that susurr-wotsit word?!

      • Michael Edwards

        She's not got a clue but she does have hips. Funny - think I've said that before!

      • L. B. Mek

        'mother's, learn to knit
        by watching mothers, knit
        painstakingly, passing
        one thread though another
        to fix those holes, in human
        connections
        skilfully balancing aesthetic worth
        with the tangible practicality's
        needed, to maintain togetherness
        in everyday life..
        Nature, too
        let spiders, weave
        their own cobweb paths to survival
        but, Time's
        change
        and windswept, cultures begin
        to get warped..
        now, knitting
        is a mass produced
        machine, action
        and family's
        have lost the trick, to knit
        nuclear, together
        like, they once did
        yet
        that lowly spider
        still
        curate their, cobwebbed
        paths
        like their mother's did
        ...'
        (simply Brilliant, Michael
        forgive me I couldn't help trying
        to poetically express
        what your artistry communicated to me)

        • Michael Edwards

          What a super response - you must post it in the gallery

        • Saxon Crow

          A very understated little poem Mike. Into my faves it goes.

        • Goldfinch60

          Beautiful words Michael and an intriguing artwork.

          Andy

          • Michael Edwards

            Thanks Andy - I call it Broken Thread - white mount and black frame.



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