In the silence all alone
Thoughts of you touch my soul
For every hurt said or done
By me or you, well I let them go
You see, it's a road we were walking on
just for a while
And that was twenty years ago
But still crowding my mind
I forgive you
There now it's done
All the burden I carried
In my heart has now gone
I wish you well on the journey of yours
Be free of any obligation and debt we incurred
And to myself well I forgive you too
You tried your best
But sometimes you lose
And that's ok so don't take it so bad
It's a part of this life and some lessons
are hard
Just let it all go you don't need so much weight
The soul is a whisper not to be pulled down by pain
And all it takes are three simple words
With a meaning so deep
That is everywhere heard
I forgive you
Now let it all go
The best kind of love
That you can give any soul
- Author: Saxon Crow ( Offline)
- Published: June 25th, 2022 00:46
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Comments7
Very true and thoughtful words SC, we must leave the past behind us and move forward in our lives.
Andy
You forgive me? What did I do?! heehee.
Do shut up, Orchi, says Fido! lol.
There is something freeing and pure and unshackling about forgiveness to the forgiver that is quite under rated in our contemporary worldview. Thanks for sharing.
The burden of unforgiving is too heavy to carry. It is a cloud around the sunshine, a shadow bespoiling our fulfillment.
Forgiving is as much a gift we give ourselves as it is to the other party. Indeed it will often be a gift for us alone. But those near to us will benefit tebfold from our new freedom of spirit.
An enlightening post.
Well said Sax. 😉
When we hold onto things .. it can weigh us down and affect our happiness . A good writing .. and nicely expressed too . ))
very nice read, and some very true statements mostly the last line. nicely penned with a good flow.
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