DO NOT LET ME GO

Raven333

  Aching with pain all over, mostly in my head.

My heart I am not even going to mention,

Because I think it is cold and dead.

  Pushing everything down and stuff it in a box

I would hate for someone to find the key,

Because this is something that should never be unlocked.

  Unreal, somethings I have seen on the way

Nobody can convince me it was a dream or a play.

The negative energy that absorbs most souls, some do not even fight it.

Please, step aside...

  Because I know for sure my pride is kicking in,

And she is screaming " GIRL, HOLD ON TIGHT" give in to what?

The sins of the world, I am better than that...

I am an individual soul,.. I know I probably will not win.

  But something inside me,

Just will not let me go...  

  • Author: Tammy Smith Sarazin (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 30th, 2022 20:14
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just another sad poem about struggles and choices.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 18
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  • Goldfinch60

    Emotive words Tammy but there will be strength within you to overcome and win your battles.

    Andy

    • Raven333

      Thank you for the battles that we fight is what makes us strong.

    • tallisman

      Hi Tammie, strong and punchy, emotive, it’s not “just another sad poem”…i

      • Raven333

        Thanks tallisman, I appreciate you reading

      • tallisman

        You know I once read that poetry is about emotion, if so this is a great poem!

        • Raven333

          Thanks again for your comment, and that is right I can only write down what I feel and go through.

        • deney77

          Such true words and meaning for so many xx

          • Raven333

            Right, I want to thank you for taking time to read and for your kind comment.



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