MAKE A DEAL

Raven333

Wanting to feel again,

his hand upon my thigh.

It has been to many years,

that has long ago passed me by.

A simple soft but warm kiss,

that is something I truly do miss.

A caressing stroke up and down my skin,

if it is done with a loving touch,

I would gladly like to invite you in.

I miss these things that I used to enjoy,

and I need those feelings back..

what past loves of mine have totally destroyed.

Scared of love, Scared to be touched

Scared I might like it just a little to much.

Such a battle going on deep in my head, 

should I take a chance just to feel

or continue to sit here alone feeling dead.

Pleasure is something everyone wants to feel

I just wish I could hurry it up,

and make this Incredible Deal...

  • Author: Tammy Smith Sarazin (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 3rd, 2022 13:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just a poem about wanting to feel certain things again..
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 30
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Comments4

  • Justa_Geezer

    Love the warmth and hope for the future in this 10th poem, also the passion that's always in your writings. There will be plenty out there who will truly appreciate what you have to offer Raven ! Have a great 4th July !

    • Raven333

      Thank you from the bottom of my heart, it really means a lot to me.

      • Justa_Geezer

        Hope you are enjoying a great 4th !

      • 3 more comments

      • evenwheniLie

        Beautiful poem about wanting the touch of another, but there was also a instance of heart break that gives love it’s thorns, I like reading your poems because they show a life lived without completion.. there is more life to be gotten. You do right to hesitate, because like I said; love has thorns, so I wouldn’t go chasing it, just take your time… such passion in your words.

        • Raven333

          Thank you for taking the time to read it and your comment meant a lot to me.

        • tallisman

          As always Raven, such a powerful emotive write. I admire you.

          • Raven333

            Well thank you so kindly tallisman

          • Goldfinch60

            Passionate words Tammy, I am sure all will be fine soon.

            Andy

            • Raven333

              Thanks a lot, still don't know if I want it or not. LOL



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