FINAL BREATH

Raven333

Know matter the price,

It's you

Who always pays,

In every situation

Day after day.

How much more,

Is going to be asked of me

How much more of me,

Is everyone going to take.

Walking as your laughing,

Leaving me alone

Where I lay.

Always doing for others

I would rather,

See a smile

Than wipe a tear,

From your eye.

Disrespect

I can not handle,

I also hate a lie.

These things,

I refuse

To sit and tolerate.

Nothing that am needing,

From you

I'll never ask.

How much more,

Won't someone

Please tell me,

Because this smile

Is fading fast.

Anger jumps right on me,

Yet still

I manage to smile.

I have no where to put it,

No longer

Can I push it down.

Understanding others

Is what am here for,

It comes natural..

That's what I do.

But you never treat me,

Like I have been

Treating you.

Some people

Will face the music,

Admit

To when they are wrong.

Others

Are constantly right,

Admission

Is no where in their song.

So now

I will leave you,

As one day

I will leave in death,

The earth will lose

An angel..

When I take

My Final Breath.

  • Author: Tammy Smith Sarazin (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 26th, 2022 11:16
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just another poem expressing my thoughts
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 24
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Comments6

  • sirlocowicked AKA Bubba

    Bravo 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 straight from the heart ❤️

  • 3 more comments

  • tallisman

    Superb Raven, I can read your poems all day!

    • Raven333

      You my friend is like a dream come true, you are so kind to me.

    • Saxon Crow

      A beautifully sad and lonely poem Raven. I enjoyed reading it

      • Raven333

        Thank you Saxon, much appreciated.

      • Goldfinch60

        Emotive words Tammy but that smile that you have will always be with you as you do have good things in your life, just keep them to the front of your mind.

        Andy

        • Raven333

          Thanks Goldfinch, I will. Even though I might write sad doesn't mean that am sad at the moment. Thank god most of it is in my past. much appreciated..

        • Justa_Geezer

          Yet another great poem Raven, Keep writing them down on paper and get that healing process complete. Really loved your finale !

          • Raven333

            Thanks so much, I appreciate your support.

          • hzugman

            Very moving Raven. Good flow of ideas.

            • Raven333

              Thank you very much hzugman



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