Bitter Beddy-Byes

Rocky Lagou

Feelings drip like spilled milk...

The stone-faced reflection and the endless complexion.

All seams dispersing from the perfectly embroidered smile –

Nothing divine can save me now.

 

I was expecting a grander ending,

Like the one between Arachne and Athena.

I swallowed a pill of happiness...

But the aftertaste was revolting.

 

My two feet manage to take me to bed,

And I gaze at the Moon pretending...

To nurture me like a mother – to love me like a father.

With heavenly kisses...from the sky its sending.

 

I glance at the black widow - that abides in my bedroom,

That looks like a dead carnation –

Full-fledged in the nooks and crannies and debris.

It feels nothing and carelessly spins...

 

for it has consumed me.

  • Author: Rocky Lagou (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 25th, 2022 10:07
  • Comment from author about the poem: I honestly don't even know how I wrote this poem. I'm a little ambivalent towards it, it's kinda like a "love-hate relationship." My mind has just been feeling a little burned out recently, must be school or my personal struggles. But I hope this can connect with someone...somewhere.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 38
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  • Goldfinch60

    I am sure that those dark moments will go away and the light that is in your life will flare up again Rocky.

    Andy

    • Rocky Lagou

      Hi, thanks a bunch Andy. I do hope so, things have just been pretty bleak recently, but I have hope. Thanks abundantly for the kind wishes!

    • orchidee

      Yes, hoping for 'lighter' times for you!

      • Rocky Lagou

        Hiya Orchi, really glad you stopped by and hopefully enjoyed the poem. Life, especially family life, has been a little hectic lately, but I will surelly keep my head up. Thanks for the love, see ya!

      • Neville


        I know the feeling and I know it only too well .. wake up dreaming of heaven .. but spent another day living hell ................. Neville 🎶:)

        • Rocky Lagou

          Couldn't have said it better myself.

        • Fay Slimm.

          An engaging and well composed piece of reflection which captured my full attention from line number one - - your talent for painting with words is amazing dear Rocky.

          • Rocky Lagou

            Omg, hearing this from my muse means so much. You are a wise sunflower, always gleaming hope and love



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