That love shines above us,
That sparkling light of love
Is there and ignites our passion.
The laughter we have
Brings us closer,
Closer each moment,
Each moment we are together.
Without that spark,
Without that laughter,
Love is empty.
I look at her beauty without,
I look at her beauty within
And write these words,
I am a poet,
But she is poetry.
- Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: September 12th, 2022 00:56
- Comment from author about the poem: Mary and I went to see La Boheme last night and it brought these words to me.
- Category: Love
- Views: 44
- Users favorite of this poem: Saxon Crow, Bella Shepard, Rocky Lagou
Comments8
And poetry and art live on, loving how these are all interconnected. Thanks kindly for sharing.
My pleasure cryptic bard.
Andy
I’ve had my say on love and poetry
And feel my irritation is just fine;
So I’m here once more to do my duty…
But Andy ‘cos its you I’ll drop this line….
This is only because you don’t bang on about it all the time…🙂
Although love is the most important thing in life I do not 'bang on about it' as there is so much in life to talk about.
Thank you Dave.
Andy
Too true, Andy. I wish I could find my escaped inspiration, instead of relying on you. You have inspiration in spades.
Best poem you've written by far.
Most kind SC, thank you.
Andy
A fine write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
So beautiful!
Much appreciated Soma.
Andy
Dear Andy, This poem of love is so beautiful, and the last five lines just breathtaking. I saw La Boheme several years ago, and for me it contains some of the most beautiful operatic pieces ever written. You both must have been in heaven.
Thank you Bella.
Yes we were in heaven, it was a terrific performance.
Andy
That’s so beautiful dear Andy…
Most kind spilleronsheet, thank you.
Andy
Literally so simple but so freaking POWERFUL!
Like those last two lines actually sent a jolt of emotion through me.
Love this Andy!!
Thank you Rocky, much appreciated.
Andy
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