So what I might tell you
Is going to slow you down.
Now am screaming at you,
Stay within the white light!!
If it's happening to you
I know it doesn't,
Feel quite right.
This is pure evil
Am telling you of..
I know exactly
What am talking about
Keep it away
Because if you let it in
It will consume you,
No doubt..
If you are reading this now
And can identify
You know it's self taught
Always disallow,
Am here to testify.
This evil wants to penetrate you
And reach into your soul,
Never forget
That you have all the inner control.
Fighting this battle
Between our creator and sin
It has always been never ending,
Do I really have to tell you what side will win.
This is why I say, pure evil
Connect the dots
Do you know what you smell,
It's our flesh that rots.
Trying hard not to go there
Because it will scare you to death.
Please heed at my warning
Reader Beware..
When you draw in, your last breath.
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Author:
Tammy Smith Sarazin (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: part 2 of part 1 talking about my own hell
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Good to see you getting it out in the open, where you can really fight it Raven, keep on at it and destroy it, free yourself from it !
Amen my brother!!! I have a couple pieces can't wait to share.. very different from my norm
Share away to your hearts content !
I see why now this site only wants us to share one a day.. a girl could go CRAZY
Try allpoetry.com then, you can put as many as you want on there, but you do have to comment on 2 other poems, before you add another
OMG, I can not believe you said that.. I am already a member there, since May. that was the first poetry site I came across so I checked it out and I do love it.. I run alot of contest there and here lately been getting a little inspiration to write about different things entering prompt contest... are you a member?
Indeed I am Raven, same name on there as well, been a member since it was th old poetry.com, maybe 2000 or so.
I lost many many poems on that poetry,com site when it folded, along with thousands of othere who though their poems were safe and secure, but that was then, and now is now, so we plod on !
Awesome, that's great.. I am not Raven over there, I am moonbaby805.. Like I said that was the first I ran across when I got home in Feb. I believe I have been there since May 6... I love it..
Keep fighting, you will triumph
oh you just don't know.. I believe am on my way
That is awesome!!
Your on your way, and your not alone!
I know, I have been so busy with my mother and granddaughter lately I haven't had the time to sit and read but am going to make a little before my dr app... appreciate you tallisman
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